Re: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Revised Email Message to Request Feedback regarding the flow charts
Thanks, Chuck. Please find a couple of suggested edits in the version attached. One of my suggestions is to remove the specific reference to voting thresholds as I think the orange boxes are more about the process for initiation / adoption than just the voting thresholds. Best regards, Marika From: <Gomes>, Chuck Gomes <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx> Date: Wednesday 20 August 2014 23:04 To: "gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx> Subject: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Revised Email Message to Request Feedback regarding the flow charts Attached are redline and clean versions of a revised email template requesting feedback about the flowcharts showing the two new GNSO processes under consideration. Please use the clear version to propose edits. Edits and comments are needed by end of the day on Monday, 25 August. Of course they are welcome sooner than that; that will allow time for discussion of proposed edits on the list. Chuck ³This message (including any attachments) is intended only for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed, and may contain information that is non-public, proprietary, privileged, confidential and exempt from disclosure under applicable law or may be constituted as attorney work product. If you are not the intended recipient, you are hereby notified that any use, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this communication is strictly prohibited. If you have received this message in error, notify sender immediately and delete this message immediately.² Attachment:
Draft Email on GNSO Flowcharts (5) Redline - MK.docx Attachment:
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