[gnso-policyimpl-wg] Updated Public Comment Review Tool

[Mary Wong <mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx>]

Dear WG members,

Please find attached an updated version of the Public Comment Review Tool,
which reflects the discussion and suggestions from the WG call held earlier
today. The one addition that was made after the call was with respect to the
IPC comment in #4.15, which now reflects two possible reworded versions to
clarify our original wording dealing with a WG¹s recommending that
additional policy issues be addressed during implementation ­ as Anne had
agreed to suggest language for this and has done so, I have now added her
suggestion to Greg¹s in the ³Recommended Action² column.

Action items from today (which are reflected as comments in the text):
* Avri to work with Cheryl, Alan and staff to develop a new recommendation
(which can be a potential new Principle) to deal with the ALAC comments on
public interest and other issues that emerge in implementation
* Staff to confirm that the three new processes do not conflict with the new
public comment periods
* Staff to add clarifying language to the Final Report distinguishing the
applicability and scope of the different processes in the main body of the
report (e.g. which one applies only to Consensus and which to both Consensus
and non-Consensus Policy)
For ease of reference, this version accepts all changes through last week.

Thanks and cheers
Mary

Mary Wong
Senior Policy Director
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: +1 603 574 4892
Email: mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx

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