[gnso-policyimpl-wg] RE: Updated Public Comment Review Tool

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Mary.  Regarding 4.15, I think I personally prefer 'may be
identified' over 'may become apparent' but I think either one would be fine.
If Anne and Greg have a preference, I think we should accept their
preference considering that they represent the IPC.

 

Chuck

 

From: owner-gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gnso-policyimpl-wg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Mary Wong
Sent: Wednesday, April 01, 2015 5:32 PM
To: gnso-policyimpl-wg
Subject: [gnso-policyimpl-wg] Updated Public Comment Review Tool

 

Dear WG members,

 

Please find attached an updated version of the Public Comment Review Tool,
which reflects the discussion and suggestions from the WG call held earlier
today. The one addition that was made after the call was with respect to the
IPC comment in #4.15, which now reflects two possible reworded versions to
clarify our original wording dealing with a WG's recommending that
additional policy issues be addressed during implementation - as Anne had
agreed to suggest language for this and has done so, I have now added her
suggestion to Greg's in the "Recommended Action" column.

 

Action items from today (which are reflected as comments in the text):

*       Avri to work with Cheryl, Alan and staff to develop a new
recommendation (which can be a potential new Principle) to deal with the
ALAC comments on public interest and other issues that emerge in
implementation
*       Staff to confirm that the three new processes do not conflict with
the new public comment periods
*       Staff to add clarifying language to the Final Report distinguishing
the applicability and scope of the different processes in the main body of
the report (e.g. which one applies only to Consensus and which to both
Consensus and non-Consensus Policy)

For ease of reference, this version accepts all changes through last week. 

 

Thanks and cheers

Mary

 

Mary Wong

Senior Policy Director

Internet Corporation for Assigned Names & Numbers (ICANN)

Telephone: +1 603 574 4892

Email: mary.wong@xxxxxxxxx

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