[gnso-ppsc-pdp] Comment on final
Hi, I made a bunch of comments in the Executive section and not much else. I built this on Marika's original version. I might have done more, but I need to go out and shovel snow now and there is no guarantee that I will get back to this (or anything else) today. I did not review the procedure manual yet, but do believe this needs to wait until all the other issues are discussed and settled. I will try to get to the overarching issue doc over the weekend. apologies if that is too late for consideration I have one general comment, there is a real mix of grammar - e.g. past, present and gerund used in the same paragraph. I know this has do to the long patchwork process of writing, but it should be smoothed out before this goes out for review. I might add that though some of my comments might seem harsh at times, I think this is a herculean task and appreciate the effort that is going into it. a. Attachment:
PDP-WT - Draft Final Report - Updated 28 October 2010 with line numbers+ad.doc |