[gnso-ppsc-wg] Re: edit pass

["J. Scott Evans" <jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx>]

I like Avri's fix to the GNSO issue.  I have made just a few editorial 
revisions on top of Avri's comments.  
 j. scott evans - senior legal director, global brand and trademarks - Yahoo! 
Inc. - 408.349.1385 - jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx






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From: Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx>
To: Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx>
Cc: J. Scott Scott Evans <jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Wed, May 26, 2010 1:28:00 PM
Subject: edit pass

hi,

it was such an enthralling read, i went through to the end - and this after 
asking for an extension.

i did a lot of markup and tried to propose some solution to the GNSO-CO issue.  
might have gone too far, but do not think i did anything substantial.  

i also pointed out some areas that might need a patch or two.

i am fine with shipping it once these or equivalent fixes are made.

thanks

a.