[gnso-ppsc-wg] Final Version - GNSO Working Group Guidelines
Dear All, Please find attached the final version of the Working Group Guidelines, incorporating / addressing the comments and edits provided by Avri, J. Scott and Cheryl. In relation to Caroline’s comments, apart from comment 1, I did not include her other suggestions as these seemed to be more substantial than just edits and therefore requiring further discussion by the WT, noting that there will be an opportunity to address these in the PPSC discussions. I hope this is acceptable. If there are any other edits /typos that need fixing, please let me know as soon as possible, but no later than 18.00 UTC today (Monday 31 May). Following that, I will submit the document for posting. Thanks! Marika On 31/05/10 10:55, "Cheryl Langdon-Orr" <langdonorr@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: Only thing I noted in the version sent was an odd bit odf what looked like 'comment' still in line in the Page 1 Sec 1.1 Background, paragraph 2 line 4 from :...and; secondly, what guidance should be provided to a WG on elements such as structuring, norming is this a word? perhaps 'setting norms' would be less neologistic, tasking, reporting, and delivering the outcome(s) as chartered (the working group process)." that needs fixing... Cheryl Langdon-Orr (CLO) On 31 May 2010 10:53, J. Scott Evans <jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: Sent attachment in second email. Sorry for the confusion! On Sun May 30th, 2010 5:32 PM PDT Cheryl Langdon-Orr wrote: >I saw no attachment of the mark up file :? > But I'm sure they would be agreeable... > >Cheryl Langdon-Orr >(CLO) > > > >On 31 May 2010 10:18, J. Scott Evans <jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > >> I like Avri's fix to the GNSO issue. I have made just a few editorial >> revisions on top of Avri's comments. >> >> j. scott evans - senior legal director, global brand and trademarks - >> Yahoo! Inc. - 408.349.1385 - jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx >> >> >> >> ------------------------------ >> *From:* Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx> >> *To:* Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx> >> *Cc:* J. Scott Scott Evans <jscottevans@xxxxxxxxx> >> *Sent:* Wed, May 26, 2010 1:28:00 PM >> *Subject:* edit pass >> >> hi, >> >> it was such an enthralling read, i went through to the end - and this after >> asking for an extension. >> >> i did a lot of markup and tried to propose some solution to the GNSO-CO >> issue. might have gone too far, but do not think i did anything >> substantial. >> >> i also pointed out some areas that might need a patch or two. >> >> i am fine with shipping it once these or equivalent fixes are made. >> >> thanks >> >> a. >> >> Attachment:
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GNSO Working Group Guidelines - Final - redline - 31 May 2010.doc
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