Re: [gnso-ppsc-wg] Please review - Revised GNSO WG Guidelines + WG WT Responses

[Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx>]

Hi,

I did an edit pass, and corrected a bunch of errors in the text i had 
contributed.

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Attachment: GNSO WG Guidelines - Revised - 14 October 2010 + ad.doc
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On 14 Oct 2010, at 06:08, Marika Konings wrote:

> Dear All,
> 
> Following J. Scott's email, please find attached and posted on the wiki 
> (https://st.icann.org/icann-ppsc/index.cgi?working_group_team) the following 
> documents:
> 
>       • List of Issues Identified by the PPSC + WG WT Response – I've 
> integrated in the PPSC list of issues the responses from the WG WT. I noted 
> that for Issue 4 and Issue 6 no suggested language was provided. I've 
> listened to the recording of last week's call and on that basis drafted a 
> proposed response. Please review and let me know if it reflects the WT's 
> views accordingly.
>       • Revised version of the GNSO Working Group Guidelines – For ease of 
> readability and identifying the changes made, I have removed the comments and 
> WG WT responses as these are already included in document 1. I noticed that 
> no changes had been made for issue 6 as discussed on the previous call, so I 
> have included draft language in section 3.3 that aims to reflect the WG WT's 
> view. Also, I've added a couple of lines to the introduction to reflect the 
> current state of the document and corrected some spelling and formatting 
> issues. This version also includes the proposed language for Cross Community 
> Working Groups in section 1.3.
> Please review both documents carefully and share any edits, comments, 
> suggestions with the mailing list at the latest by Wednesday 20 October at 
> 11:59:59 PM UTC. 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Marika
> 
>  
> <PPSC Comments + WG WT Response - 14 October 2010.doc><GNSO WG Guidelines - 
> Revised - 14 October 2010.doc>