Re: [gnso-ppsc-wg] Please review - Revised GNSO WG Guidelines + WG WT Responses
Hi, I did an edit pass, and corrected a bunch of errors in the text i had contributed. a.
GNSO WG Guidelines - Revised - 14 October 2010 + ad.doc
On 14 Oct 2010, at 06:08, Marika Konings wrote: > Dear All, > > Following J. Scott's email, please find attached and posted on the wiki > (https://st.icann.org/icann-ppsc/index.cgi?working_group_team) the following > documents: > > • List of Issues Identified by the PPSC + WG WT Response – I've > integrated in the PPSC list of issues the responses from the WG WT. I noted > that for Issue 4 and Issue 6 no suggested language was provided. I've > listened to the recording of last week's call and on that basis drafted a > proposed response. Please review and let me know if it reflects the WT's > views accordingly. > • Revised version of the GNSO Working Group Guidelines – For ease of > readability and identifying the changes made, I have removed the comments and > WG WT responses as these are already included in document 1. I noticed that > no changes had been made for issue 6 as discussed on the previous call, so I > have included draft language in section 3.3 that aims to reflect the WG WT's > view. Also, I've added a couple of lines to the introduction to reflect the > current state of the document and corrected some spelling and formatting > issues. This version also includes the proposed language for Cross Community > Working Groups in section 1.3. > Please review both documents carefully and share any edits, comments, > suggestions with the mailing list at the latest by Wednesday 20 October at > 11:59:59 PM UTC. > > Thanks, > > Marika > > > <PPSC Comments + WG WT Response - 14 October 2010.doc><GNSO WG Guidelines - > Revised - 14 October 2010.doc>