RE: [gnso-rap-dt] For your review - Updated Charter and workshop outline

["James M. Bladel" <jbladel@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Marika et al:

Apologies for the delayed response.

My only concern would be with respect to the first sentence under the
heading "Additional research and identifying concrete policy issues."

Towards the middle of this sentence, the existing text reads:
  "...additional research would be needed in order to fully appreciate
the current practices of abusers and contracting parties..."

Suggested edits:

1.  Change "contracting" to "contracted"

2.  The general proximity of "abusers and contracted parties" probably
needs additional qualification to distinguish the problem (abusers) from
potential solutions (contracted parties).  I would suggest adding
"mitigation efforts" before "contracted parties."

3.  Non-contracted parties, such as (but not limited to) security firms,
ISPs, hosting companies, etc., also make significant contributions to
addressing post-registration abuse.  If we wish to acknowledge this
here, we could add "and other organizations" after "contracted parties."

4.  Taken together, the amended sentence would read:

   "The issues report outlines a number of areas where additional
research would be needed in order to fully appreciate the current
practices of abusers, and mitigation efforts of contracted parties and
other organizations, and the scope of problems that exist...."

Also, I noted that this topic is also mentioned on pg.3 when describing
the proposed topics for the Workshop.  Items #1 and #2 from my list are
not applicable here, but if we desire to include the efforts of
non-contracted organizations in the workshop topics, we should also do
so here.

Thank you--

J.


-------- Original Message --------
Subject: [gnso-rap-dt] For your review - Updated Charter and workshop
outline
From: Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tue, January 20, 2009 10:22 am
To: "gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx>

 For your review - Updated Charter and workshop outline Dear All,
 
 Please find attached an updated version of the charter and workshop
outline incorporating the comments and suggestions discussed and
received. As outlined below, in order to get this to the GNSO Council
for consideration on their next meeting, the group would need to
finalize this document by COB January 21 January. Please share your
comments and suggestions with the list. Also indicate if you need more
time in order to review this document.
 
 I have attached both a redline version as well as a clean copy.
 
 With best regards,
 
 Marika
 
 ------ Forwarded Message
 From: Liz Gasster <liz.gasster@xxxxxxxxx>
 Date: Fri, 16 Jan 2009 10:45:18 -0800
 To: Glen de Saint Géry <Glen@xxxxxxxxx>, <gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx>
 Subject: [gnso-rap-dt] RE: Registration Abuse Policies drafting team
MP3 January 16, 2009
 
 
 
 All,
 
 On our call today, the group discussed edits to the draft charter that
Marika sent earlier this week.  A new draft will be circulated on
Monday, incorporating edits that Mike sent to the list and others we
discussed.
 
 The group decided to try to finalize the proposed charter on the list
by COB January 21 so that the Council could consider the proposal at its
29 January meeting, based on progress made to-date.  This is earlier
than we originally estimated on our first call.  This means that we will
need your input and sign-off on the new documents by next Wednesday.  If
the group finds that further work is needed before we can finalize, then
we will decide on email if we should revert to the previously decided
target of 12 Feb (for 19 Feb. Council meeting).
 
 The group also discussed the SSAC paper and invitation, and planning
for a workshop in Mexico.  Current thinking on those areas will be
reflected in the revision we send on Monday. 
 
 For those NOT on today's call, please let us know ASAP if you have any
concerns about this approach.
 
 Thanks, Liz
 
 -----Original Message-----
 From: owner-gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx]
On Behalf Of Glen de Saint Géry
 Sent: Friday, January 16, 2009 10:06 AM
 To: gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx
 Subject: [gnso-rap-dt] Registration Abuse Policies drafting team MP3
January 16, 2009
 
 
 Dear All,
 
 Please find the MP3 recording of the Registration Abuse Policies
drafting team held on Friday 16 January 2009 at 15:00 UTC at:
 http://audio.icann.org/gnso/gnso-rap-20090116.mp3
 On page:
 http://gnso.icann.org/calendar/#jan
 
 Present for the teleconference:
 Greg Aaron - Registry C.
 Mike Rodenbaugh - CBUC
 Kristina Rosette - IPC
 Olga Cavalli - NCA
 
 Absent apologies:
 James Bladel - Godaddy RRc
 
 Staff:
 Marika Konings
 Liz Gasster
 Glen de Saint Gery - GNSO Secretariat
 
 Thank you and let me know if you have any questions.
 Kind regards,
 Glen
 
 
 Glen de Saint Géry
 GNSO Secretariat
 gnso.secretariat@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
 http://gnso.icann.org
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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