RE: [gnso-rap-dt] For your review - Updated Charter and workshop outline
All, Attached are my suggested revisions in clean and redline form. I made the change that James suggested in #1 below, and addressed his #2 by flipping the order to "contracted parties and abusers." I don't recall that the issues report was limited to mitigation so didn't incorporate that suggestion. As for point 3, it wasn't covered in the issues report, which is what the relevant section is referencing, so I didn't include it there. I did include it in the panel outline; it tracked our discussion from our last call. I'd very much like to reach agreement by list - if possible. My Friday will be awful and not having our call would be a big help. K -----Original Message----- From: owner-gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of James M. Bladel Sent: Wednesday, January 21, 2009 5:39 PM To: Marika Konings Cc: gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx Subject: RE: [gnso-rap-dt] For your review - Updated Charter and workshop outline Marika et al: Apologies for the delayed response. My only concern would be with respect to the first sentence under the heading "Additional research and identifying concrete policy issues." Towards the middle of this sentence, the existing text reads: "...additional research would be needed in order to fully appreciate the current practices of abusers and contracting parties..." Suggested edits: 1. Change "contracting" to "contracted" 2. The general proximity of "abusers and contracted parties" probably needs additional qualification to distinguish the problem (abusers) from potential solutions (contracted parties). I would suggest adding "mitigation efforts" before "contracted parties." 3. Non-contracted parties, such as (but not limited to) security firms, ISPs, hosting companies, etc., also make significant contributions to addressing post-registration abuse. If we wish to acknowledge this here, we could add "and other organizations" after "contracted parties." 4. Taken together, the amended sentence would read: "The issues report outlines a number of areas where additional research would be needed in order to fully appreciate the current practices of abusers, and mitigation efforts of contracted parties and other organizations, and the scope of problems that exist...." Also, I noted that this topic is also mentioned on pg.3 when describing the proposed topics for the Workshop. Items #1 and #2 from my list are not applicable here, but if we desire to include the efforts of non-contracted organizations in the workshop topics, we should also do so here. Thank you-- J. -------- Original Message -------- Subject: [gnso-rap-dt] For your review - Updated Charter and workshop outline From: Marika Konings <marika.konings@xxxxxxxxx> Date: Tue, January 20, 2009 10:22 am To: "gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx> For your review - Updated Charter and workshop outline Dear All, Please find attached an updated version of the charter and workshop outline incorporating the comments and suggestions discussed and received. As outlined below, in order to get this to the GNSO Council for consideration on their next meeting, the group would need to finalize this document by COB January 21 January. Please share your comments and suggestions with the list. Also indicate if you need more time in order to review this document. I have attached both a redline version as well as a clean copy. With best regards, Marika ------ Forwarded Message From: Liz Gasster <liz.gasster@xxxxxxxxx> Date: Fri, 16 Jan 2009 10:45:18 -0800 To: Glen de Saint Géry <Glen@xxxxxxxxx>, <gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx> Subject: [gnso-rap-dt] RE: Registration Abuse Policies drafting team MP3 January 16, 2009 All, On our call today, the group discussed edits to the draft charter that Marika sent earlier this week. A new draft will be circulated on Monday, incorporating edits that Mike sent to the list and others we discussed. The group decided to try to finalize the proposed charter on the list by COB January 21 so that the Council could consider the proposal at its 29 January meeting, based on progress made to-date. This is earlier than we originally estimated on our first call. This means that we will need your input and sign-off on the new documents by next Wednesday. If the group finds that further work is needed before we can finalize, then we will decide on email if we should revert to the previously decided target of 12 Feb (for 19 Feb. Council meeting). The group also discussed the SSAC paper and invitation, and planning for a workshop in Mexico. Current thinking on those areas will be reflected in the revision we send on Monday. For those NOT on today's call, please let us know ASAP if you have any concerns about this approach. Thanks, Liz -----Original Message----- From: owner-gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Glen de Saint Géry Sent: Friday, January 16, 2009 10:06 AM To: gnso-rap-dt@xxxxxxxxx Subject: [gnso-rap-dt] Registration Abuse Policies drafting team MP3 January 16, 2009 Dear All, Please find the MP3 recording of the Registration Abuse Policies drafting team held on Friday 16 January 2009 at 15:00 UTC at: http://audio.icann.org/gnso/gnso-rap-20090116.mp3 On page: http://gnso.icann.org/calendar/#jan Present for the teleconference: Greg Aaron - Registry C. Mike Rodenbaugh - CBUC Kristina Rosette - IPC Olga Cavalli - NCA Absent apologies: James Bladel - Godaddy RRc Staff: Marika Konings Liz Gasster Glen de Saint Gery - GNSO Secretariat Thank you and let me know if you have any questions. Kind regards, Glen Glen de Saint Géry GNSO Secretariat gnso.secretariat@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://gnso.icann.org ------ End of Forwarded Message Attachment:
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KR revision Draft RAP charter.DOC
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