[gnso-rap-dt] RAPWG Final Report - Adjustment Recommendation

[berrycobb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx]

RAPWG,

Per our call today, IMO the current text within the Executive Summary  
(page 4/5) & Body Content (page 21) is confusing.  I recommend the  
following change to better represent what the WG completed in our  
abuse analysis.
Current Text:
In discussing registration abuse versus domain name use abuse, the  
RAPWG noted that registration abuses may occur at various points in a  
domain name?s lifecycle. The RAPWG therefore found that making  
distinctions between pre-domain-creation, domain-creation, and  
post-creation abuses is sometimes not applicable or useful when  
considering whether an abuse is in-scope for policy-making.
Proposed Text:
In discussing registration abuse versus domain name use abuse, the  
RAPWG noted that registration abuses may occur at various points in a  
domain name?s lifecycle.  The RAPWG attempted to make distinctions of  
abuse within the lifecycle such as pre-domain-creation,  
domain-creation, and post-creation.  However, this exercise was not  
useful in determining policy scope, and as such, the RAPWG only made  
the distinction between Registration and Use.
Change @ Page 4/5
Change @ Page 21



Berry Cobb
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