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Re: [gnso-rrc-a] Draft to Response to Public Comments and Finalization of Report
- To: Margie Milam <Margie.Milam@xxxxxxxxx>, "gnso-rrc-a@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-rrc-a@xxxxxxxxx>
- Subject: Re: [gnso-rrc-a] Draft to Response to Public Comments and Finalization of Report
- From: Beau Brendler <beaubrendler@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Mon, 11 Oct 2010 19:34:50 -0400 (GMT-04:00)
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id="compText">well, that two weeks went by rather quickly.<br><br>I've pasted
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<p class="MsoBodyText"><u><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";">ADDENDUM to Final Report:<span
style=""> </span>SubTeam A Review of Public Comments </span></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent: 0.5in;"><span style="">SubTeam A has
carefully reviewed the comments received in the public
comment forum on the Initial Report on the Proposals for Improvements to the
Registrar Accreditation Agreement</span> <span style=""><a
href="http://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/public-comment-201007-en.htm#raa-improvements2010";>http://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/public-comment-201007-en.htm#raa-improvements2010</a><span
style=""> </span><span style=""> </span>pertaining to the
work of SubTeam A , <span style=""> </span>and the summary prepared by
ICANN Staff posted
at:<span style=""> </span><a
href="http://forum.icann.org/lists/raa-improvements2010/msg00010.html";>http://forum.icann.org/lists/raa-improvements2010/msg00010.html</a>.<span
style=""> </span><span style=""> </span>Some
of these reflect important insights and perspectives that the Council should
consider.</span></p>
<p class="MsoBodyText"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";">SubTeam A notes the following
responses to
several of the comments received: </span></p>
<p style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt;
line-height: 150%; font-family: "Calibri","sans-serif";"
lang="EN-GB"><span style="">
</span>With regard to the comments that expressed disappointment
regarding the proposed Registrant Rights and Responsibilities Charter, SubTeam
A notes that the scope of its work was limited by the Charter for the Drafting
Team and the constraints of the 2009 Registrar Accreditation Agreement.<span
style=""> <br></span></span></p><p style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt
0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 150%; font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";" lang="EN-GB"><span
style=""><br></span></span></p><p style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.25in;"><span
style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 150%; font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";" lang="EN-GB"><span style="">
[These preceeding paragraphs seem more complicated than they need to be, and
sell us short a bit. How about: <br></span></span></p><p style="margin: 0in 0in
12pt 0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 150%; font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";" lang="EN-GB"><span
style=""><br></span></span></p><p style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.25in;"><span
style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 150%; font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";" lang="EN-GB"><span
style="">Reflected in the public comments, and in the reaction of several
people in the at-large community is a sense of disappointment that SubTeam A
did not go far enough in its work. Indeed some members of SubTeam A at first
thought the report was something of an exercise in stenography, or cutting and
pasting language from the RAA into the registrant rights document. However, as
work progressed three issues became clear: One, the scope of SubTeam A's work
was limited to the contents of the current RAA; two, no plain-English version
of the RAA actually existed, and obtaining one from ICANN staff required
several weeks of work. Three, timing had created a situation in which
registrars were in violation of the RAA for each passing day they did not have
the current language on registrant rights posted to their web
sites.</span></span></p><p style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.25in;"><span
style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 150%; font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";" lang="EN-GB"><span style="">As the
process unfolded, members of the team concluded that proposed improvements to
the RAA would need to be consigned to an "Aspirational" Charter, which should
be a "living" document, open to additions. Several attempts have been made, and
will continue to be made, to solicit cross-community input on these future
improvements to the RAA. SubTeam A is supportive of calls from INTA and others
to further develop and redefine the charter, and particularly, to develop a
roadmap for how the content of the Aspirational Charter will be evaluated and
included in future versions of the RAA.<br></span></span></p><p style="margin:
0in 0in 12pt 0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; line-height: 150%;
font-family: "Calibri","sans-serif";" lang="EN-GB">SubTeam
A therefore recommends the GNSO Council support and encourage participation in
cross-community activities underway with the At-Large Community and with other
groups that have formed since the Nairobi ICANN meeting to address consumer and
end-user issues within ICANN.<br></span></p>
<p style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt;
line-height: 150%; font-family: "Calibri","sans-serif";"
lang="EN-GB"></span><span style="font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";" lang="EN-GB"><span
style=""></span>In a similar vein, several who submitted comments
suggested revisions to the principles described in the Aspirational
Charter.<span style=""> </span><span style=""></span><span
style=""></span>SubTeam A recommends a) these comments be evaluated as part
of any future work to be commenced on the Aspirational Charter though the new,
cross-community effort described above, and b) that those who are interested
should submit comments directly to the charter's wiki page at {...}.</span></p>
<p style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.25in;"><span style="font-family:
"Calibri","sans-serif";" lang="EN-GB"><span style="">The
team also reviewed c</span>omments from the
Internet Commerce Association suggesting elimination of language containing
legal conclusions.<span style="">
</span>However, after discussion, SubTeam A did not reach consensus for
revising the Registrant Rights and Responsibilities Charter in
the manner suggested.<span style=""> SubTeam A invites the Internet Commerce
Association to engage in the cross-community comment process as described,
using the wiki.<br></span></span></p>
<br>.................that's a combination of what Margie wrote and my
additions.<br><br><blockquote style="border-left: 2px solid rgb(0, 0, 255);
padding-left: 5px; margin-left: 0px;">-----Original Message-----
<br>From: Margie Milam <margie.milam@xxxxxxxxx>
<br>Sent: Oct 11, 2010 5:22 PM
<br>To: "gnso-rrc-a@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-rrc-a@xxxxxxxxx>
<br>Subject: [gnso-rrc-a] Draft to Response to Public Comments and Finalization
of Report
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<p class="MsoNormal">Dear All, <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">In an effort to conclude the work of SubTeam A,
I drafted the attached Response based upon the RAA’s last telephone call
on 27 Sept. Since I did not receive Beau Brendler’s
recommended language as discussed on our call, please note that Beau may have
additional content to share with the SubTeam. <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Please review and revise the Draft Response as appropriate,
and send your comments to me by COB on Wednesday, 13 October.
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will then add it as an exhibit to the Final Report and circulate the final draft
for your review and consideration.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">Best Regards,<o:p></o:p></p>
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Margie <o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">_____________<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Margie Milam<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Senior Policy Counselor<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">ICANN<o:p></o:p></p>
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