[gnso-sti] Lawyers and others

[Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>]

I will reserve substantive comments until the meeting, but do have 
one comment here.

Although I know it was suggested with the best of intent, I find the 
statement on the composition of the review team on page 3 somewhat 
inappropriate.
"The STI was comprised largely of attorneys, from all SGs, with years 
of Internet and trademark law, plus a few non-lawyers who worked hard 
to keep the work focused and clear."
I would suggest that the sentence either praise us all uniformly for 
our hard work, cooperation, sense of urgency, good jokes, whatever, 
or alternatively simply stop after "non-lawyers".
Alan