[gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg] version 2 of the drawing
<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">hi all,<div><br></div><div>thanks for all the hammering (er, feedback). here's another draft to take a look at.</div><div><br></div><div>Rick, i'm sortof being purposeful in my use of terms. the point of this exercise, at least for me, is to get a handle on the difference between what is inside and outside our scope. the one exception is the "authoritative" point -- we had a long conversation about that in the drafting-team and realized that there are at least two definitions of "authoritative" that we need to take a look at. here's the relevant snippet from the charter:</div><div><br></div><blockquote style="margin: 0 0 0 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;"><div><i>The Working Group should consider the term "authoritative" in both the technical (the repository of the authoritative data) and policy (who has authority over the data) meanings of the word when considering this issue.</i></div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Alan is correct to twig me about my flippant use of that term. i've sprinkled it a few more places, with question marks, to acknowledge that.</div><div><br></div><div>i think the biggest change i've made to this drawing is to highlight the scope boundary between what we're charged with looking at, and the rest. </div><div><br></div><div>see what you think. off to lunch, followed by a nap. i await further refinements. :-)</div><div><br></div><div>mikey</div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html> Attachment:
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