RE: [gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg] slightly amended version of our working draft -- for discussion on the call tomorrow

[Carolyn Hoover <choover@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

I will not be able to attend the call tomorrow because of an unexpected 
conflict but will look through and respond via email to the updated text before 
the meeting.

Carolyn


From: owner-gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx 
[mailto:owner-gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Alan Greenberg
Sent: Monday, September 30, 2013 5:20 PM
To: Mike O'Connor; Thick Whois WG
Subject: Re: [gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg] slightly amended version of our working 
draft -- for discussion on the call tomorrow

On the modified rec., there is a "that" missing after concludes.

I will once again not be able to attend this meeting, which comes in the middle 
of a 4-hour ATRT conference call to finalize the recommendations in our draft 
report.

I would much prefer this call be postponed so that I could attend....

Alan

At 30/09/2013 03:50 PM, Mike O'Connor wrote:

hi all,

Marika and i took a stab at working Alan's suggestions into the draft that 
we'll be reviewing on the call tomorrow.  here's the result of our effort.

mikey



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hi all,

Marika and i took a stab at working Alan's suggestions into the draft that 
we'll be reviewing on the call tomorrow.  here's the result of our effort.

mikey




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