Re: [gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg] slightly amended version of our working draft -- for discussion on the call tomorrow

[marie-laure Lemineur <mllemineur@xxxxxxxxx>]

Dear Mike,

I find the edits of the last paragraph in both version a little bit
confusing at the beginning. Once the changes are accepted  it reads as
follows,
3) "We recommend that if the ICANN Board concludes privacy issues will not
be adequately addressed within the scope of the Board - initiated PDP on
gTLD registration data services , or otherwise be addressed, that the
Board, initiate such actions as to ensure that privacy issues are fully and
adequately addressed....."

Am I missing something?

best,

Marie-laure


On Mon, Sep 30, 2013 at 1:50 PM, Mike O'Connor <mike@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> hi all,
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> Marika and i took a stab at working Alan's suggestions into the draft that
> we'll be reviewing on the call tomorrow.  here's the result of our effort.
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