[gnso-thickwhoispdp-wg] another pass through the recommendations draft
<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">hi all,<div><br></div><div>i thought i'd take another pass through the draft. i started with Alan's, took note of comments on the list, and collaborated with Don Blumenthal (privacy and data-protection sub-team chair) to arrive at this version of the 7.1 material.</div><div><br></div><div>with regard to the 7.3 changes, i have put 4 options in this draft -- two from Avri (sorry Avri, but your original suggestion on 18-Sept and your 1-Oct suggestion are a bit different and i wanted to capture both), one from Alan that Don and i tweaked a bit, and Tim's. we didn't get to this section during the last call, so i view these as the basis for a discussion with the hope that we can find some language that finds some middle ground on the call next week. </div><div><br></div><div>i've completely given up on the revision-tracking in that last document, so this is a new black-line version. sorry about that.</div><div><br></div><div>see what you think,</div><div><br></div><div>thanks all,</div><div><br></div><div>mikey</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div></div></body></html> Attachment:
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