Re: [gnso-vi-feb10] Salop and Wright - Edits to Section 2.2

["Phil Buckingham" <pjbuckingham@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Jeff,

As ever, well drafted . To the outsider , maybe a new applicant , it is factual 
and objective . If they , or indeed the Board members, want to delve deeper it 
is sufficiently cross referenced , to enable them to draw their own 
conclusions. Pleased that "all advocacy" has been removed.

I think there is a minor typo " Version 2 that included minimal restrictions on 
vertical integration  in the form ( insert - of a ) new gTLD registry agreement 
" .

regards

Phil Buckingham




  ----- Original Message ----- 
  From: Neuman, Jeff 
  To: Gnso-vi-feb10@xxxxxxxxx 
  Sent: Monday, July 19, 2010 10:41 PM
  Subject: [gnso-vi-feb10] Salop and Wright - Edits to Section 2.2


  All,

   

  Based on today's discussion and the agreement to remove Section 4 of the 
Initial report, I have drafted some language that we can include in Section 2.2 
to discuss Salop and Wright.  On the call we discussed not having the report as 
an Annex, but rather just linking to it.

   

  I would like for everyone to review to make sure that they are comfortable 
with what I have drafted.  I believe it is objective and takes out all of the 
advocacy.  That said, I wrote it so of course I feel this way.


  I am particularly interested in feedback from Avri, as I believe this is the 
reason for her protest and wanting a Minority Report. 

   

  P.S., I took the text from the Wiki, put it in Word and therefore was not 
able to get the footnotes right.  

   

  Let me know your thoughts.

   

  Jeffrey J. Neuman 
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