[gnso-vi-feb10] SRSU Exception Text - Revised - DIR?
Here's revised SRSU exception text that incorporates some (not all) of Eric's changes and most of Jeff N.'s wording (I tweaked it slightly by adding /SRMU and using .brand and .ngo). I didn't receive any other changes. I've left a placeholder for other exception text (Richard - HINT!). I've also left a placeholder for text that sets out the criticisms of SRSU. I think it's important to include that - not only for balance, but to help those who may submit public comments. I don't know if this is DIR, but I have to offline until after 2400 GMT so am sending it along now. (I will be back online about 90 minutes after 2400 GMT if that helps.) Our document comparison software is offline so I can't generate a redline. Apologies. K Attachment:
07212010 SRSU exception text.DOC
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