[gnso-whoissurvey-dt] Last few questions

[Don Blumenthal <dblumenthal@xxxxxxx>]

Based on an experience that I just had when returning to the questionnaire, we 
should have language asking people to click Resume Later if they take a break. 
I timed out. Also stress to use the Previous button instead of the back page.

Another general note. i.e. And e.g. should be italicized throughout.

I went back to look at Requirement descriptions and recheck one question
Descriptions
R3 – space between query and (question) at the end of the italicized section.

R6a – To evolve from rather than to be evolved from

R7 – US7ASCII issue that I raised before

Recheck
R5 – is it necessary to force an answer to the data element ranking?

Onward
R8.1
Description - Elavated should be elevated in italicized section
Is there a problem with saying that the rate limiting is necessary in the 
description but then asking a question about it at the end of the section?
Capitalize first words in explanations
Preferred approach – space between verified and while
Also, "by which WHOIS users identify"

R8.2
Extraneous space at the start of the second parenthetical in the description?

R8.3
Auditable metrics – is there an extraneous space between ( and For?

I don't see an R9

R10 – thick WHOIS
Start of description. All new TLDs should… Doesn't that beg a question in the 
section?

R10 - WHOWAS
Explanation - Can we split the first sentence? It got hard to follow. At the 
least, put a comma between name and which.
Also, insert a space after time. and before A and between WHOWAS and service.

R11
Explanation - "alternately" should start a new sentence.
How would POC be valuable – is there an extraneous empty line at the top of the 
question?