RE: [gtld-council] Recommendation 20 - New Wording Proposal

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Excellent work Philip.  Very constructive.
 
I am pressed for time right now because of multiple meetings but I will
respond more later.  As you can see from my response to Mawaki's
message, I think there were a couple key things that you left out.  But
overall, I like what you did.
 
Chuck Gomes
 
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        From: owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Philip Sheppard
        Sent: Wednesday, July 18, 2007 5:34 AM
        To: gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
        Subject: [gtld-council] Recommendation 20 - New Wording Proposal
        
        
        I like Chuck's new approach very much and support the objective.
        On re-reading all our efforts I see we are all confusing:
        - an objective
        - a process
        - guidelines / definitions.
         
        Taking Chuck's lead I attach a new proposal which separates out
these three.
         
        Does this work for everyone ?
         
        Philip
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