I think the rec20 sub-group has done great work and support the new  
formulation. I just have a issue with the structure. The good point  
re material harm has been inserted under "process". This is the  
wrong place. It should be captured with our own guidelines for  
"substantial" (meaning in its pure sense "having substance,  
existing, material" - not only measured by volume). So see proposed  
edit below with a cut from process and a new point (h).
PS I've substituted detriment rather than "material harm" which is  
a better word in this context.  (And I believe this picks up  
Mawaki's point too).
I hope the committee can adopt this friendly amendment.
Philip
Recommendation 20
An application will be rejected if an expert panel determines that  
there is substantial opposition to it from a significant portion of  
the community to which the string may be explicitly or implicitly  
targeted.
The remainder of the discussion focussed on the following items but  
is not yet complete.
Process
§  Opposition must be objection based.
§  Determination will be made by a dispute resolution panel  
constituted for the purpose (perhaps like the RSTEP pool of  
panelists from which a small panel would be constituted for each  
objection)
§  The objector must provide verifiable evidence that it is an  
established institution of the community .
 Implementation Guideline --
 ( A small information paper is coming out from the Implementation  
Team on the place of public comments in the application evaluation  
process but there may be an automatic response to public comments  
that will alert public commenters to the objection process ) .
Guidelines
The task of the panel is the determination of substantial opposition.
a) substantial
In determining substantial the panel will assess the following:
§  significant portion
§  community
§  explicit or implicit targeting
§  established institution
§  formal existence.
§  detriment
b) significant portion:
In determining significant portion the panel will assess the  
balance between:
§  the level of objection submitted by one or more established  
institutions and
§  the level of support provided in the application from one or  
more established institutions.
The panel will assess :
§  significance proportionate to the explicit or implicit targeting.
c) community
Community should be interpreted broadly and will include for  
example an economic sector, a cultural community, or a linguistic  
community. It may also be a closely related community which  
believes it is impacted.
d) explicitly targeted
Explicitly targeted means there is a description of the intended  
use of the TLD in the application.
e) implicitly targeted
Implicit targeting means that the objector makes an assumption of  
targeting or that the objector believes there may be confusion by  
users over its intended use.
f) established institution
An institution that has been in formal existence for at least 5  
years. In exceptional cases, standing may be granted to an  
institution that has been in existence for fewer then 5 years.  
Exceptional circumstance include but are not limited to re- 
organisation, merger, or an inherently younger community.
The following ICANN organizations are established institutions:  
GAC, ALAC, GNSO, ccNSO, ASO (but this element requires further  
discussion)
g) formal existence
Formal existence may be demonstrated by:
§  appropriate public registration,
§  public historical evidence,
§  validation by a government, intergovernmental organization,  
international treaty organisation or similar.
h) detriment
Evidence of detriment to the community or to users more widely must  
be provided.
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