Re: [gtld-council] PDP Dec05: Updated Final Report

[Liz Williams <liz.williams@xxxxxxxxx>]

Chuck

I do appreciate very much the quick turn around on the edits which  
I'll incorporate immediately and will double check with Patrick and  
Cary on those two which relate to them.
Liz
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Liz Williams
Senior Policy Counselor
ICANN - Brussels
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On 01 Aug 2007, at 01:37, Gomes, Chuck wrote:

> Thank you very much Liz for all of your excessively long hours on  
> this, both recently and over the last 1.5+ years.  The document is  
> looking really good.
> I went through the document quite thoroughly today and summarized  
> my suggested edits and comments in the attached file organized by  
> page #, etc.  I don't believe that I suggested any material  
> changes; in fact, I think most of them are fairly minor.  But there  
> are several that I would like to call attention to because they  
> involve more than simple formatting, grammar corrections or simple  
> rewording.  In that regard I would like to call everyone's  
> attention to my edits for the following pages:
> Page 10, ¶ 13 - the 2nd sentence
>
> Page 23
>
> Page 46 (It would be especially helpful if Cary and Patrick checked  
> this one.)
> Page 47 (It would be especially helpful if Cary and Patrick checked  
> this one.)
> Page 62 (I think this is fairly important.)
>
> To make it easy to find the above I formatted them in bold font in  
> the attached file.
> Chuck Gomes
>
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> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > [mailto:owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Liz Williams
> > Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2007 4:49 AM
> > To: gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> > Subject: [gtld-council] PDP Dec05: Updated Final Report
> >
> > Colleagues
> >
> > Here is a PDF version of the report -- I will have it posted
> > to the GNSO website draft documents section shortly.
> >
> > I am sorry for the delay -- I had email server problems.
> >
> > Of course, any questions, please let me know.
> >
> > Liz
> >
> > <Edits to Intro to New gTLD PDP Final Report Part A - Gomes 31 Jul  
> > 07.doc>