RE: [gtld-council] PDP Dec05: Updated Final Report
Thank you very much Liz for all of your excessively long hours on this, both recently and over the last 1.5+ years. The document is looking really good. I went through the document quite thoroughly today and summarized my suggested edits and comments in the attached file organized by page #, etc. I don't believe that I suggested any material changes; in fact, I think most of them are fairly minor. But there are several that I would like to call attention to because they involve more than simple formatting, grammar corrections or simple rewording. In that regard I would like to call everyone's attention to my edits for the following pages: Page 10, ¶ 13 - the 2nd sentence Page 23 Page 46 (It would be especially helpful if Cary and Patrick checked this one.) Page 47 (It would be especially helpful if Cary and Patrick checked this one.) Page 62 (I think this is fairly important.) To make it easy to find the above I formatted them in bold font in the attached file. Chuck Gomes "This message is intended for the use of the individual or entity to which it is addressed, and may contain information that is privileged, confidential and exempt from disclosure under applicable law. Any unauthorized use, distribution, or disclosure is strictly prohibited. If you have received this message in error, please notify sender immediately and destroy/delete the original transmission." > -----Original Message----- > From: owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx > [mailto:owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Liz Williams > Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2007 4:49 AM > To: gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Subject: [gtld-council] PDP Dec05: Updated Final Report > > Colleagues > > Here is a PDF version of the report -- I will have it posted > to the GNSO website draft documents section shortly. > > I am sorry for the delay -- I had email server problems. > > Of course, any questions, please let me know. > > Liz > Attachment:
Edits to Intro to New gTLD PDP Final Report Part A - Gomes 31 Jul 07.doc
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