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RE: [gtld-council] PDP Dec05: Updated Final Report

  • To: "Liz Williams" <liz.williams@xxxxxxxxx>, <gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Subject: RE: [gtld-council] PDP Dec05: Updated Final Report
  • From: "Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Tue, 31 Jul 2007 19:37:18 -0400

Thank you very much Liz for all of your excessively long hours on this, both 
recently and over the last 1.5+ years.  The document is looking really good.

I went through the document quite thoroughly today and summarized my suggested 
edits and comments in the attached file organized by page #, etc.  I don't 
believe that I suggested any material changes; in fact, I think most of them 
are fairly minor.  But there are several that I would like to call attention to 
because they involve more than simple formatting, grammar corrections or simple 
rewording.  In that regard I would like to call everyone's attention to my 
edits for the following pages:

Page 10, ¶ 13 - the 2nd sentence
 
Page 23

Page 46 (It would be especially helpful if Cary and Patrick checked this one.)

Page 47 (It would be especially helpful if Cary and Patrick checked this one.)

Page 62 (I think this is fairly important.)

To make it easy to find the above I formatted them in bold font in the attached 
file.

Chuck Gomes
 
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx 
> [mailto:owner-gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Liz Williams
> Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2007 4:49 AM
> To: gtld-council@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
> Subject: [gtld-council] PDP Dec05: Updated Final Report
> 
> Colleagues
> 
> Here is a PDF version of the report -- I will have it posted 
> to the GNSO website draft documents section shortly.
> 
> I am sorry for the delay -- I had email server problems.
> 
> Of course, any questions, please let me know.
> 
> Liz
> 

Attachment: Edits to Intro to New gTLD PDP Final Report Part A - Gomes 31 Jul 07.doc
Description: Edits to Intro to New gTLD PDP Final Report Part A - Gomes 31 Jul 07.doc



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