Re: [soac-mapo] Updated Letter

[Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond <ocl@xxxxxxx>]

Jon,

first - thanks for this very fast turn-around.
I just have a handful of very minor editing changes - words missing in
sentences. Sorry, I'm picky. :-)
Please check that this does not change the meaning of the sentence.
Please find my redline based on your letter (ie. which does not include
Robin's amendments)
Kind regards,

Olivier

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Olivier MJ Crépin-Leblond, PhD
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