[soac-newgtldapsup-wg] JAS WG: Latest draft of Final Report
Hello, JAS WG members,
Attached please find the most recent draft of the JAS WG Final Report, both as
a redline and a clean copy. This is the "20110826 (RHv2SGv2)" draft.
Kindly base any comments at this point on this draft. And thanks for being
careful regarding the draft numbers.
PROGRESS IN THE ATTACHED DRAFT
In this draft, you will see:
1) Incorporation of the points made on Friday's call regarding the "Funds
and Foundation" section (p. 10)
2) The rewriting of the following sections:
- Introduction (p. 4)
- Support Should Be Offered from the First Round Onward (p. 5)
- Frequently Asked Questions (FAQs) (p. 34)
- Appendix 1: Levels of WG Agreement Referred to Within This
Report (p. 39)
- Appendix 2: JAS WG Background (p. 40)
- Appendix 3: Glossary (p. 47)
THIS TUESDAY'S JAS WG CALL
During the upcoming call on Tuesday, 30 August, we will aim to review the six
rewritten sections listed under number 2 above.
Because this is a total of about 25 pages, it would likely be helpful if WG
members could read the sections before Tuesday's call. Also before the call,
you may wish to enter your comments on the wiki page set up for this purpose:
https://community.icann.org/display/jaswg/JAS+WG+Final+Report+--+30+Aug+2011+comments.
Note: The paragraph numbering in the Appendices does contain some anomalies,
so won't be as useful as in other sections. However, the Appendices contain
enough subheadings and other "markers" that indicating the text about which
you're commenting shouldn't be difficult.
Many thanks, as always,
Seth
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Seth Greene
Interim Manager, At-Large
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
Telephone: + 1 (212) 662-7723
E-mail: seth.greene@xxxxxxxxx<mailto:seth.greene@xxxxxxxxx>
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