Re: [soac-newgtldapsup-wg] JAS WG: Latest draft of Final Report

[Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>]

Here are my comments. I have not had nearly as much time to do this 
as I hoped (lost power for 10 hours yesterday).
Alan

At 27/08/2011 08:41 PM, Seth Greene wrote:
> Hello, JAS WG members,
>
> Attached please find the most recent draft of the JAS WG Final 
> Report, both as a redline and a clean copy.  This is the "20110826 
> (RHv2SGv2)" draft.
> Kindly base any comments at this point on this draft.  And thanks 
> for being careful regarding the draft numbers.
> PROGRESS IN THE ATTACHED DRAFT
>
> In this draft, you will see:
>
>    1)  Incorporation of the points made on Friday's call regarding 
> the "Funds and Foundation" section (p. 10)
>    2)  The rewriting of the following sections:
>             -  Introduction (p. 4)
>
>             -  Support Should Be Offered from the First Round Onward (p. 5)
>
>             -  Frequently Asked Questions (FAQs) (p. 34)
>
>             -  Appendix 1: Levels of WG Agreement Referred to 
> Within This Report (p. 39)
>             -  Appendix 2:  JAS WG Background (p. 40)
>
>            -   Appendix 3:  Glossary (p. 47)
>
>
>
> THIS TUESDAY'S JAS WG CALL
>
>
>
> During the upcoming call on Tuesday, 30 August, we will aim to 
> review the six rewritten sections listed under number 2 above.
>
>
> Because this is a total of about 25 pages, it would likely be 
> helpful if WG members could read the sections before Tuesday's 
> call.  Also before the call, you may wish to enter your comments on 
> the wiki page set up for this 
> purpose: 
> <https://community.icann.org/display/jaswg/JAS+WG+Final+Report+--+30+Aug+2011+comments>https://community.icann.org/display/jaswg/JAS+WG+Final+Report+--+30+Aug+2011+comments.
>
>
> Note:  The paragraph numbering in the Appendices does contain some 
> anomalies, so won't be as useful as in other sections.  However, the 
> Appendices contain enough subheadings and other "markers" that 
> indicating the text about which you're commenting shouldn't be difficult.
>
>
> Many thanks, as always,
>
> Seth
>
>
>
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