Re: [ssac-gnso-irdwg] FOR REVIEW: Draft Presentation for Cartagena

[Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Owen.  These are very helpful edits.  I’ll incorporate them right away.

Best regards,

Julie


On 11/16/10 12:49 PM, "Owen Smigelski" <Owen.Smigelski@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hi Julie,

Looks good.  I have no substantive changes, the only minor edits are:

p. 7      change “v.s.” to “vs” or “vs.”
p. 8      3rd bullet point, should be “A- or U-label” instead of “A or U-label”

Regards,

Owen


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From: owner-ssac-gnso-irdwg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-ssac-gnso-irdwg@xxxxxxxxx] 
On Behalf Of Julie Hedlund
Sent: Monday, November 15, 2010 11:48
To: ssac-gnso-irdwg@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: [ssac-gnso-irdwg] FOR REVIEW: Draft Presentation for Cartagena

Dear IRD-WG members,

Here is the draft presentation for Cartagena for your review.  Please respond 
with any changes by COB this Thursday, 18 November so that I can prepare a 
revised draft for review prior to the discussion on our call on Monday, 22 
November at 1600 UTC (0800 PST/1100 EST).  Please feel free to enter changes 
directly into the document and I will reconcile them with other comments 
received into one draft.

Thank you very much for your assistance.

Best regards,

Julie