RE: [ssac-gnso-irdwg] FOR REVIEW: Draft Presentation for Cartagena

["Owen Smigelski" <Owen.Smigelski@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Julie,

 

Looks good.  I have no substantive changes, the only minor edits are:

 

p. 7      change "v.s." to "vs" or "vs."

p. 8      3rd bullet point, should be "A- or U-label" instead of "A or
U-label"

 

Regards,

 

Owen

 

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From: owner-ssac-gnso-irdwg@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-ssac-gnso-irdwg@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Julie Hedlund
Sent: Monday, November 15, 2010 11:48
To: ssac-gnso-irdwg@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: [ssac-gnso-irdwg] FOR REVIEW: Draft Presentation for Cartagena

 

Dear IRD-WG members,

Here is the draft presentation for Cartagena for your review.  Please
respond with any changes by COB this Thursday, 18 November so that I can
prepare a revised draft for review prior to the discussion on our call
on Monday, 22 November at 1600 UTC (0800 PST/1100 EST).  Please feel
free to enter changes directly into the document and I will reconcile
them with other comments received into one draft.

Thank you very much for your assistance.

Best regards,

Julie