Re: [gnso-ccwg-dt] FOR REVIEW: Draft Slides for Public Session

[Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>]

John,

Thank you for your very helpful (and precise) comments and for sending them
so quickly.  I'll be sure your changes are reflected in the final slides.

Best regards,

Julie


On 10/19/11 6:03 PM, "john@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx" <john@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
wrote:

> Julie,

Thanks for this.  Just a few jots and tickles to clean up:

Slide 2,
> it is i.e., not e.g.
Slide 6, it is the role, not ;
Slide 7, capitalize the U
> in Utilization
Slide 9, capitalize the C in Charter
Slide 10, capitalize the c
> in ACs

Cheers,

Berard

-------- Original Message --------
Subject:
> [gnso-ccwg-dt] FOR REVIEW: Draft Slides for Public Session
From: Julie Hedlund
> <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: Wed, October 19, 2011 1:21 pm
To:
> "gnso-ccwg-dt@xxxxxxxxx" <gnso-ccwg-dt@xxxxxxxxx>

 FOR REVIEW: Draft Slides
> for Public Session Dear Jonathan and CCWG-DT
members,
 
 Here are some draft
> slides in PDF and PowerPoint for your review. 
Please provide any comments by
> **Sunday, 23 October.**  The slides for
the GNSO Council update on 26 October
> 2011 will be excerpted from these
slides as a subset.  The GNSO Council slides
> will need to be posted on
the ICANN Dakar meetings site by Monday the 24th (48
> hours before the
meeting).  So, as soon as we have your comments on these
> slides we can
select those we wish to use for the shorter GNSO Council
> update
presentation and get them posted.  Below I have included the details
> for
both the GNSO Council Update and the public session on 27 October. 
 

> GNSO Council Update: Wednesday, 26 October 2011, 1400-1800
Dakar-UTC/0700
> PDT/1000 EDT (15 minutes during the meeting)

> Agenda:
https://community.icann.org/display/gnsocouncilmeetings/Agenda+26+Octo
> ber+2011
 Remote access details: http://dakar42.icann.org/node/26967
 

> CCWG-DT Public Session: Thursday, 27 October 2011, 0830-1000
Dakar-UTC/0130
> PDT/0430 EDT
 Agenda and remote access details:
> http://dakar42.icann.org/node/26991
 
 Thank you very much for your
> assistance.
 
 Best regards,
 
 Julie
 
 Julie Hedlund
 Policy Director