Re: [gnso-ccwg-dt] Some more suggested edits to the principles document

[Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>]

Chuck,

Thank you for your helpful edits.  I have integrated them with those from John 
in the attached document in Word and PDF.  This is the version I will display 
in the Adobe Connect room too unless there are further changes.

Best regards,

Julie


On 11/22/11 10:31 AM, "Chuck Gomes" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:


For those who do not know, I have decided to join this group along with 
Jonathan from the RySG with the understanding that Jonathan will still be the 
primary RySG representative.

I attached a red-lined version of the principles showing some suggested edits 
with comments explaining my thinking.  If I had a Word version of the document 
instead of a PDF, I would have integrated my edits with those submitted by 
others.

I will do my best to participate in the call today but likely will not have 
online access because I will be driving my wife to have a medical procedure.


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Attachment: Draft Principles for CWGs_jb-cg.doc
Description: Draft Principles for CWGs_jb-cg.doc

Attachment: Draft Principles for CWGs_jb-cg.pdf
Description: Draft Principles for CWGs_jb-cg.pdf