The document we will be using on Google Accounts on Monday is at the link provided below by Olof. Note that it will not show the markups so I suggest that you also have the Word version I attached available online as well if that is possible. The attached version should also be reviewed before the meeting so that you can readily see the latest edits that were made.
Chuck Gomes
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-----Original Message-----
From: Olof Nordling [mailto:olof.nordling@xxxxxxxxx]
Sent: Friday, August 17, 2007 4:31 AM
To: 'GNSO.SECRETARIAT@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx'; Gomes, Chuck
Subject: RE: [Fwd: RE: [gnso-idncctlds-wg] Draft for final review of GNSO comments re. the ccNSO/GAC Issues Paper]
Chuck, Glen,
I've uploaded it as a new file on
http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dgw6snvn_0g6zxgd
Lost the mark-ups, though, so it's a clean version with the comments appearing
as footnotes. Anyway, it's there with a bit of beginner's luck :-) If that's
OK, please forward to list. Otherwise, if we need the redline version posted,
perhaps Tin Wee could help out.
Best
Olof
-----Original Message-----
From: GNSO.SECRETARIAT@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
[mailto:gnso.secretariat@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx]
Sent: den 16 augusti 2007 20:35
To: Gomes, Chuck; Olof Nordling; GNSO.SECRETARIAT@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Subject: [Fwd: RE: [gnso-idncctlds-wg] Draft for final review of GNSO comments
re. the ccNSO/GAC Issues Paper]
Thanks so much Chuck.
Olof can you load this up, I can perhaps see if I can do it as well, then we
send out the url to the group.
Thanks
Glen
-------- Message original --------
Sujet: RE: [gnso-idncctlds-wg] Draft for final review of GNSO comments
re. the ccNSO/GAC Issues Paper
Date: Thu, 16 Aug 2007 14:14:31 -0400
De: Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>
Pour: Olof Nordling <olof.nordling@xxxxxxxxx>, Glen De Saint Géry
<glen@xxxxxxxxx>
Glen/Olaf,
Let's use the attached version for our meeting on Monday. It contains all of
Olaf's latest edits plus one small one I found.
Chuck Gomes
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*From:* Olof Nordling [mailto:olof.nordling@xxxxxxxxx]
*Sent:* Thursday, August 16, 2007 10:46 AM
*To:* Gomes, Chuck
*Subject:* RE: [gnso-idncctlds-wg] Draft for final review of GNSO
comments re. the ccNSO/GAC Issues Paper
Hi Chuck,
I?ve been nitpicking again (can?t resist that temptation,
seemingly..) and came up with the attached redline version ? a few
really small typos etc, nothing of substance, so I just send it for
your consideration for the next/final list version.
Best regards
Olof
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*From:* owner-gnso-idncctlds-wg@xxxxxxxxx
[mailto:owner-gnso-idncctlds-wg@xxxxxxxxx] *On Behalf Of *Gomes, Chuck
*Sent:* den 15 augusti 2007 00:51
*To:* gnso-idncctlds-wg@xxxxxxxxx
*Subject:* [gnso-idncctlds-wg] Draft for final review of GNSO
comments re. the ccNSO/GAC Issues Paper
*Importance:* High
The attached document is ready for final review and editing by our
small group. I attempted to highlight all changes made in today's
meeting but I would appreciate it if those who were on the call
would verify to make sure I did it accurately. For those not on the
call, we finished going through all of the comments and proposed
edits that group members had submitted for the entire document.
This will be our plan of attack in our final teleconference call
this next Monday:
1. Review, discuss and finalize the edits made in today's call
2. Identify, discuss and finalize any other portions of the
document that any group members flag for additional
consideration.
Action items for all group members, to be completed before our call
this coming Monday:
1. Read the entire document to identify any sections that you
think need further discussion and/or possible edits and be
prepared to communicate them in our final meeting or earlier
2. Be prepared to communicate your support or lack of support for
the final document; if there are any portions of the document
that you cannot support, be ready to submit a minority
statement explaining your concerns not later than 24 hours
after the final document is distributed to the list following
our final meeting.
3. Submit any comments or questions to the list for online
discussion between now and our final meeting.
4. It would be extremely helpful if everyone can participate in
our final teleconference call, but if you cannot, please do
the following: 1) understand that this meeting will be the
final opportunity for input into the final document; 2) notify
me in advance of your inability to participate; 3) at least 24
hours before the final meeting, communicate via the list any
points you want to make or edits you want to suggest for any
part of the document; 4) communicate your support or lack of
support for the document and whether you anticipate submitting
a minority statement within 24 hours after the final document
is distributed to the list following our final meeting.
Action items for Mark McFadden, needed NLT Sunday morning, 19 August:
1. Write and submit text to the list for consideration as an
additional paragraph just prior to the start of Section
A. (See comment 1 in the document.) In particular, you made
the following comment: : " I believe that we might consider a
set of general, overall principles by which we formed our
answer. For instance, some text that urges the ccNSO, GAC and
interested governments to address those policy issues that are
specific to ccTLD issues. In addition, there is the principle
that operational and general policy issues are guided by the
GNSO's ongoing work on the introduction of new gTLDs and
IDNs. I think a separate paragraph, prior to the detailed
comments would be helpful and I would be happy to supply some
text that goes after this paragraph."
2. Write and submit text to the list for consideration as an
addition to the proposed GNSO response for the following
question on page 14: "/c) How will such issues as competing
requests (both domestic and international) be dealt with?/"
For reference, you made the following comment in your original
review of the document: ?I think there needs to be a richer
answer here. In a perfect world there would be no competing
requests and the idea of an international competing request is
a concept that makes very little sense to me. DO you think
they meant those situations where .ORG supported Cyrillic?
I'm not clear on what is being "competed" for in this
question. When I read the question I thought it meant
competing registries for ccTLD representation in other
scripts. Can we chat on this one? I'd be happy to supply
text, but perhaps I don't understand the question properly."
(See comment 2 in the document.)
Action item for Glen: Take whatever steps are necessary in advance
of our final meeting so that we can all view the document live
during our call.
Chuck Gomes
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