[gnso-igo-ingo] RE: Consolidated Draft of Initial Report for IGO/INGO PDP WG
David Maher & I went through all of the proposed edits and comments pretty thoroughly. As you can see in the attached file, we did the following: * We made edits where I thought they were needed, mostly non-substantive we believe. * If something was not clear, we flagged it and/or asked questions. * In a few cases, we confirmed changes made and in a couple cases disagreed with some comments made. * In a few cases, we noted that we didn't think comments should be made because the documents in question were simply attachments. Note that we highlighted all of my edits in yellow to make them really obvious or, if the yellow highlighting didn't show, we inserted comments that are highlighted in yellow. If we assume that a large part of this report is a collection of various positions of WG members that do not necessarily have WG support, we don't have any major problems with the edits that people have added. We encourage all to check the edits we made to make sure that they are accurate in terms of what was intended. Because our next meeting conflicts with the regular RySG meeting, neither of us will be able to attend the WG call but we hope that the input we attached with this message will contribute to finalization of the report for public posting. In the meantime, please feel free to ask questions on the list or make corrections to changes we suggested. We will follow up after the WG call. Chuck From: owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Brian Peck Sent: Wednesday, May 29, 2013 7:38 PM To: gnso-igo-ingo@xxxxxxxxx Cc: Erika Randall Subject: [gnso-igo-ingo] Consolidated Draft of Initial Report for IGO/INGO PDP WG Dear Working Group Members, Thank you again for your comments and suggested edits to the draft Initial Report, and for your time and contributions during today's WG call. In order to facilitate your review of all the comments received on the first draft, please find attached a consolidated version of the draft Initial Report (v.0.8.6.1) - thanks to Berry for compiling and consolidating the comments into one document. This version (v0.8.6.1.) - which will serve as the current working document, includes all proposed revisions and comments received prior to today's WG meeting with the exception of those comments from Alan and Chuck which were discussed and agreed upon during the WG call - the relevant revisions based on those discussions are included in this draft. Please note that staff is still working on other comments discussed during today's call pending further research, clarification and/or re-write. We would like to request that you please review the suggested revisions/comments in this draft (v.0.8.6.1) and provide any comments and/or questions relating to any proposed revisions you may have concerns about and believe the WG should discuss during next week's call. In order to manage the number of reviewers and possible comments, we would ask that you please accommodate our following requests in making any comments: 1. If you would like to submit a comment or question regarding a proposed revision submitted by other WG members, please use the comment box feature (Insert Comment) and not embed in the text itself. 2. Please refrain from formatting changes - staff will re-format as necessary. 3. In order to keep proper track of individual submissions, please only respond to the version sent by ICANN staff. Input Deadline: 3 June 23:59 UTC Next Meeting: 5 June 16:00 UTC Also attached for reference is a pdf version of all the comments originally received prior to today's discussion (e.g., includes the comments from Alan and Chuck which were addressed in the current consolidated version). Thank you in advance for your cooperation with these requests - prior to next Wednesday's meeting, we will re-consolidate additional comments and provide a revised draft which will also include additional completed revisions based on Alan and Chuck's comments discussed today. This document will serve as the basis for the next meeting's discussion. We greatly appreciate your continued support, time and contributions to the WG. Best Regards, Brian Peck Policy Director ICANN Attachment:
IGO-INGO_Initial_Report_v0 8 6 1 with Gomes and Maher comments.docx
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