[gnso-igo-ingo] Consolidated Draft of Initial Report for IGO/INGO PDP WG

[Brian Peck <brian.peck@xxxxxxxxx>]

Dear Working Group Members,

Thank you again for your comments and suggested edits to the draft Initial
Report, and for your time and contributions during today's WG call.

In order to facilitate your review of all the comments received on the first
draft, please find attached a consolidated version of the draft Initial
Report (v.0.8.6.1) ­ thanks to Berry for compiling and consolidating the
comments into one document.

This version (v0.8.6.1.) - which will serve as the current working document,
includes all proposed revisions and comments received prior to today's WG
meeting with the exception of those comments from Alan and Chuck which were
discussed and agreed upon during the WG call ­ the relevant revisions based
on those discussions are included in this draft.  Please note that staff is
still working on other comments discussed during today's call pending
further research, clarification and/or re-write.

We would like to request that you please review the suggested
revisions/comments in this draft (v.0.8.6.1) and provide any comments and/or
questions relating to any proposed revisions you may have concerns about and
believe the WG should discuss during next week's call.  In order to manage
the number of reviewers and possible comments, we would ask that you please
accommodate our following requests in making any comments:
1. If you would like to submit a comment or question regarding a proposed
revision submitted by other WG members, please use the comment box feature
(Insert Comment) and not embed in the text itself.
2. Please refrain from formatting changes - staff will re-format as
necessary.
3. In order to keep proper track of individual submissions, please only
respond to the version sent by ICANN staff.
Input Deadline:  3 June 23:59 UTC
Next Meeting:    5 June 16:00 UTC

Also attached for reference is a pdf version of all the comments originally
received prior to today's discussion (e.g., includes the comments from Alan
and Chuck which were addressed in the current consolidated version).

Thank you in advance for your cooperation with these requests ­ prior to
next Wednesday's meeting, we will re-consolidate additional comments and
provide a revised draft which will also include additional completed
revisions based on Alan and Chuck's comments discussed today.  This document
will serve as the basis for the next meeting's discussion.

We greatly appreciate your continued support, time and contributions to the
WG.

Best Regards,

Brian Peck
Policy Director
ICANN

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