Re: [gnso-irtpc] For your review - updated outreach letter

[Avri Doria <avri@xxxxxxx>]

Hi Marika,

I made two minor editing changes:

1. Insertion of 'be'  in '...that would welcome...' resulting in '...that would 
be welcome..."
2. Deletion of 'if we could receive '  in '...would appreciate if we could 
receive your feedback by 6 January 2012...' resulting in '...appreciate your 
feedback by 6 January 20...'


Thanks for doing the update.

avri

Attachment: IRTP Part C - Outreach letter - Updated 13 December 2011+ad.doc
Description: MS-Word document

On 13 Dec 2011, at 14:40, Marika Konings wrote:

> Dear All,
> 
> As discussed on today's meeting, please find attached an updated version of 
> the proposed outreach letter. The following changes have been made:
>       • Reflect that new GNSO PDP has been adopted by the ICANN Board
>       • Indent charter questions
>       • Clarify that other methods than template for providing input are also 
> welcome
>       • Add that feedback is appreciated by 6 January, if possible
>       • Clarify that template was developed for constituencies as well as 
> stakeholder groups (not discussed on the call, but I noticed it when editing 
> the letter)
> If you have any comments or further suggestions, please share these with the 
> mailing list within 48 hours. After that, the letter will be sent out to the 
> respective ACs/SO.
> 
> With best regards,
> 
> Marika
> <IRTP Part C - Outreach letter - Updated 13 December 2011.doc>