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RE: [gnso-irtpc] For your review - updated outreach letter
- To: "Avri Doria" <avri@xxxxxxx>, "IRTPC Working Group" <gnso-irtpc@xxxxxxxxx>
- Subject: RE: [gnso-irtpc] For your review - updated outreach letter
- From: "James M. Bladel" <jbladel@xxxxxxxxxxx>
- Date: Tue, 13 Dec 2011 20:39:30 -0700
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font-size:10pt;"><div>Team:<br><br>I think this is excellent and have no
further comments. Except to say "Thank you
Avri!"<br><br>J.</div><div><br></div>
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Subject: Re: [gnso-irtpc] For your review - updated outreach letter<br>
From: Avri Doria <<a href="mailto:avri@xxxxxxx";>avri@xxxxxxx</a>><br>
Date: Tue, December 13, 2011 3:48 pm<br>
To: IRTPC Working Group <<a
href="mailto:gnso-irtpc@xxxxxxxxx";>gnso-irtpc@xxxxxxxxx</a>><br>
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Hi Marika,<br>
<br>
I made two minor editing changes:<br>
<br>
1. Insertion of 'be' in '...that would welcome...' resulting in '...that would
be welcome..."<br>
2. Deletion of 'if we could receive ' in '...would appreciate if we could
receive your feedback by 6 January 2012...' resulting in '...appreciate your
feedback by 6 January 20...'<br>
<br>
<br>
Thanks for doing the update.<br>
<br>
avri<br>
<br>
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On 13 Dec 2011, at 14:40, Marika Konings wrote:<br>
<br>
> Dear All,<br>
> <br>
> As discussed on today's meeting, please find attached an updated version
of the proposed outreach letter. The following changes have been made:<br>
> • Reflect that new GNSO PDP has been adopted by the ICANN Board<br>
> • Indent charter questions<br>
> • Clarify that other methods than template for providing input are also
welcome<br>
> • Add that feedback is appreciated by 6 January, if possible<br>
> • Clarify that template was developed for constituencies as well as
stakeholder groups (not discussed on the call, but I noticed it when editing
the letter)<br>
> If you have any comments or further suggestions, please share these with
the mailing list within 48 hours. After that, the letter will be sent out to
the respective ACs/SO.<br>
> <br>
> With best regards,<br>
> <br>
> Marika<br>
> <IRTP Part C - Outreach letter - Updated 13 December 2011.doc><br>
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