Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

[Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>]

Sorry for the late comment.

Rec 13 now reads:

#13 The WG recommends that ICANN create and 
maintain a user-friendly, one-stop website 
containing all relevant information concerning 
disputed transfers and potential remedies to 
registrants. Such a website should be clearly 
accessible from the ICANN Registrants' Benefits 
and Responsibilities page 
(https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/benefits-2013-09-16-en).
I would suggest that "should be clearly 
accessible from" be changed to "should be clearly 
accessible from or integrated into"
That gives those implementing the recommendation 
free reign to do this in the most logical and "user-friendly" manner.
I will be on at the start of the call, but will 
need to leave within a few minutes, so if there 
are any questions about this, I would hope that 
they can be addressed at the start of the meeting.
Thanks, Alan

At 29/08/2014 10:36 AM, Lars Hoffmann wrote:
> Dear all,
>
> Apologies for the late distribution of this 
> update but thanks to the slight delay I was able 
> to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that 
> might be useful to the Group’s discussion.
> It would be great if you found some time to go 
> through the Report – especially the 
> recommendations and observations in Section 4 
> and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team.
> Main edits from the last version are related to 
> Charter Question F and the additional 
> recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on 
> pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 – including the new Recommendation #19.
> Please also note the comments from ICANN’s GDD Team on:
>    * page 14
>    * Page 16
>    * Page 18
>    * Page 22
>    * Page 24 (two comments)
>    * Page 26
>    * Page 28 (two comments)
>    * Page 30
>    * Page 42
> Finally, please note that for ease of reading I 
> have started the latest changes from a clean 
> copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined.
> Many thanks and have a good weekend and those 
> lucky enough to have Monday off – have a great Labour Day, too!
> Best,
> Lars