Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report

[Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx>]

One more small wording change.

14 starts off with: The WG recommends that, as an 
additional best practice, ICANN accredited Registrars...
That should have been: The WG recommends that, in 
addition, as a best practice, ICANN accredited Registrars
(See page 29 of the trascript - 
http://gnso.icann.org/en/meetings/transcript-irtp-d-18aug14-en.pdf 
ot at about minute 50 of the MP3).
Alan

At 07/09/2014 10:12 PM, Alan Greenberg wrote:
> Sorry for the late comment.
>
> Rec 13 now reads:
>
> #13 The WG recommends that ICANN create and 
> maintain a user-friendly, one-stop website 
> containing all relevant information concerning 
> disputed transfers and potential remedies to 
> registrants. Such a website should be clearly 
> accessible from the ICANN Registrants' Benefits 
> and Responsibilities page ( 
> https://www.icann.org/resources/pages/benefits-2013-09-16-en).
> I would suggest that "should be clearly 
> accessible from" be changed to "should be 
> clearly accessible from or integrated into"
> That gives those implementing the recommendation 
> free reign to do this in the most logical and "user-friendly" manner.
> I will be on at the start of the call, but will 
> need to leave within a few minutes, so if there 
> are any questions about this, I would hope that 
> they can be addressed at the start of the meeting.
> Thanks, Alan
>
> At 29/08/2014 10:36 AM, Lars Hoffmann wrote:
> > Dear all,
> >
> > Apologies for the late distribution of this 
> > update but thanks to the slight delay I was 
> > able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team 
> > that might be useful to the Group’s discussion.
> > It would be great if you found some time to go 
> > through the Report – especially the 
> > recommendations and observations in Section 4 
> > and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team.
> > Main edits from the last version are related to 
> > Charter Question F and the additional 
> > recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found 
> > on pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 – including the new Recommendation #19.
> > Please also note the comments from ICANN’s GDD Team on:
> >    * page 14
> >    * Page 16
> >    * Page 18
> >    * Page 22
> >    * Page 24 (two comments)
> >    * Page 26
> >    * Page 28 (two comments)
> >    * Page 30
> >    * Page 42
> > Finally, please note that for ease of reading I 
> > have started the latest changes from a clean 
> > copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined.
> > Many thanks and have a good weekend and those 
> > lucky enough to have Monday off – have a great Labour Day, too!
> > Best,
> > Lars