Re: [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Revised Task 2 Outreach Document for Review

[Olga Cavalli <olgacavalli@xxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Chuck,
we made good progress during the call, the idea is to finish complete text
revision during next Friday´s conf. call.
In general all suggested changes and edits were included, but we also
decided some slight changes related with text order.
Best regards
Olga

2010/8/27 Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>

>  Sorry I missed the call but I was a complete zombie when my day ended
> yesterday and ended up sleeping right through the call.  I will try to
> review this on my flight home today.
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> Chuck
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> *From:* owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx]
> *On Behalf Of *Julie Hedlund
> *Sent:* Friday, August 27, 2010 4:25 PM
> *To:* gnso-osc-csg
> *Subject:* [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Revised Task 2 Outreach
> Document for Review
>
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>
> Dear Work Team members,
>
> Attached is a revised version of the Task 2 Outreach Document.  During the
> Work Team call today we reviewed the 23 August document with comments from
> Krista, Chuck, and Michael.  We only had time to review the document through
> section 2.1.2.1 Representation on the Committee (up to section 2.1.3 — top
> of page 6).  We accepted the edits through this section, but we also made
> new changes.  These new changes are redlined in tracked changes so that they
> stand out.  In addition, the changes beginning in section 2.1.3 are redlined
> since we have not yet discussed them.  On our next call we will discuss
> remaining changes and any new changes to the document.
>
> *Your action is requested:* Please send comments to the list or, if you
> have specific edits, please include them as tracked edits and send them to
> me no later than  *1900 UTC/1200 PDT/1500 EDT on Thursday, 02 September,*so 
> that I may incorporate them into a revised document for discussion at our
> regular meeting on *Friday, 03 September at 1300 UTC.*
>
> *Please note:*  The document is now being discussed at the *full Work Team
> level* so we urge you to comment on the document and to attend Friday’s
> meeting.  The document also has been posted to the wiki page at:
> https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?constituency_operations_team.
>
> Thank you and please let me know if you have any questions.
>
> Best regards,
>
> Julie
>