RE: [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Revised Task 2 Outreach Document for Review

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Julie and all who contributed to the edits.  They look good to me
with one exception:  In Section 2.2.2, Newcomer Workshop, I still think
that a full day workshop is too long and too expensive.

 

I will try to call in on Friday but will  be on vacation and may not
have connectivitiy.

 

Chuck

 

From: owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx]
On Behalf Of Julie Hedlund
Sent: Friday, August 27, 2010 4:25 PM
To: gnso-osc-csg
Subject: [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Revised Task 2 Outreach
Document for Review

 

Dear Work Team members,

Attached is a revised version of the Task 2 Outreach Document.  During
the Work Team call today we reviewed the 23 August document with
comments from Krista, Chuck, and Michael.  We only had time to review
the document through section 2.1.2.1 Representation on the Committee (up
to section 2.1.3 - top of page 6).  We accepted the edits through this
section, but we also made new changes.  These new changes are redlined
in tracked changes so that they stand out.  In addition, the changes
beginning in section 2.1.3 are redlined since we have not yet discussed
them.  On our next call we will discuss remaining changes and any new
changes to the document.

Your action is requested: Please send comments to the list or, if you
have specific edits, please include them as tracked edits and send them
to me no later than  1900 UTC/1200 PDT/1500 EDT on Thursday, 02
September, so that I may incorporate them into a revised document for
discussion at our regular meeting on Friday, 03 September at 1300 UTC.  

Please note:  The document is now being discussed at the full Work Team
level so we urge you to comment on the document and to attend Friday's
meeting.  The document also has been posted to the wiki page at:
https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?constituency_operations_team.

Thank you and please let me know if you have any questions.

Best regards,

Julie