Re: [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Revised Task 2 Outreach Document for Review

[Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Olga,

after the review during confcall, there will be the last comments until last
confcall next week?

Regards

Rafik

2010/9/3 Olga Cavalli <olgacavalli@xxxxxxxxx>

> Dear work team members,
> please remember to review the document sent by Julie and send comments to
> her and to the list, if any.
> The idea for the next conference call on Friday is to review the rest of
> the document including those comments already sent by some of us and finish
> the revision.
> Best regards and talk to you next Friday.
> Olga
>
> 2010/8/27 Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>
>
>  Dear Work Team members,
>>
>> Attached is a revised version of the Task 2 Outreach Document.  During the
>> Work Team call today we reviewed the 23 August document with comments from
>> Krista, Chuck, and Michael.  We only had time to review the document through
>> section 2.1.2.1 Representation on the Committee (up to section 2.1.3 — top
>> of page 6).  We accepted the edits through this section, but we also made
>> new changes.  These new changes are redlined in tracked changes so that they
>> stand out.  In addition, the changes beginning in section 2.1.3 are redlined
>> since we have not yet discussed them.  On our next call we will discuss
>> remaining changes and any new changes to the document.
>>
>> *Your action is requested:* Please send comments to the list or, if you
>> have specific edits, please include them as tracked edits and send them to
>> me no later than  *1900 UTC/1200 PDT/1500 EDT on Thursday, 02 September,*so 
>> that I may incorporate them into a revised document for discussion at our
>> regular meeting on *Friday, 03 September at 1300 UTC.*
>>
>> *Please note:*  The document is now being discussed at the *full Work
>> Team level* so we urge you to comment on the document and to attend
>> Friday’s meeting.  The document also has been posted to the wiki page at:
>> https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?constituency_operations_team.
>>
>> Thank you and please let me know if you have any questions.
>>
>> Best regards,
>>
>> Julie
>>
>>
>