Re: [gnso-osc-csg] ACTION REQUESTED: Revised Task 2 Outreach Document for Review

[Olga Cavalli <olgacavalli@xxxxxxxxx>]

Rafik,
In my opinion if we can finish the document next Fiday, then a new version
could be available for last revision by the working group during one week,
and if there are no further suggested changes it can be sent to the OSC.
Perhaps we do not need another additional call.
But I am open to suggestions on this regard.
Best
Olga

2010/9/2 Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@xxxxxxxxx>

> Hi Olga,
>
> after the review during confcall, there will be the last comments until
> last confcall next week?
>
> Regards
>
> Rafik
>
> 2010/9/3 Olga Cavalli <olgacavalli@xxxxxxxxx>
>
> Dear work team members,
>> please remember to review the document sent by Julie and send comments to
>> her and to the list, if any.
>> The idea for the next conference call on Friday is to review the rest of
>> the document including those comments already sent by some of us and finish
>> the revision.
>> Best regards and talk to you next Friday.
>> Olga
>>
>> 2010/8/27 Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>
>>
>>  Dear Work Team members,
>>>
>>> Attached is a revised version of the Task 2 Outreach Document.  During
>>> the Work Team call today we reviewed the 23 August document with comments
>>> from Krista, Chuck, and Michael.  We only had time to review the document
>>> through section 2.1.2.1 Representation on the Committee (up to section 2.1.3
>>> — top of page 6).  We accepted the edits through this section, but we also
>>> made new changes.  These new changes are redlined in tracked changes so that
>>> they stand out.  In addition, the changes beginning in section 2.1.3 are
>>> redlined since we have not yet discussed them.  On our next call we will
>>> discuss remaining changes and any new changes to the document.
>>>
>>> *Your action is requested:* Please send comments to the list or, if you
>>> have specific edits, please include them as tracked edits and send them to
>>> me no later than  *1900 UTC/1200 PDT/1500 EDT on Thursday, 02 September,
>>> * so that I may incorporate them into a revised document for discussion
>>> at our regular meeting on *Friday, 03 September at 1300 UTC.*
>>>
>>> *Please note:*  The document is now being discussed at the *full Work
>>> Team level* so we urge you to comment on the document and to attend
>>> Friday’s meeting.  The document also has been posted to the wiki page at:
>>> https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?constituency_operations_team.
>>>
>>> Thank you and please let me know if you have any questions.
>>>
>>> Best regards,
>>>
>>> Julie
>>>
>>>
>>
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