RE: [gnso-osc-csg] FOR REVIEW: Revised Global Outreach Recommendations 03 Oct

["Hector Ariel Manoff" <amanoff@xxxxxxxxxx>]

Team,

 

I would add at point 2.1.3 (Identifying Potential Participants and Target
Populations)

 

ISOC chapters  (Internet Society chapters)

Attorney and other professional  associations 

 

Regards,

Héctor Ariel Manoff
Vitale, Manoff & Feilbogen
E-mail:  <mailto:amanoff@xxxxxxxxxx> amanoff@xxxxxxxxxx 

ARGENTINA

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De: owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx] En
nombre de Claudio Di Gangi
Enviado el: Domingo, 10 de Octubre de 2010 22:51
Para: 'Gomes, Chuck'; Olga Cavalli; OSC-CSG Work Team
Asunto: RE: [gnso-osc-csg] FOR REVIEW: Revised Global Outreach
Recommendations 03 Oct

 

Team,

 

I included some further red-line edits in the attached, building from the
changes Chuck suggests below, which I support.

 

claudio

 

From: owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx] On
Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck
Sent: Friday, October 08, 2010 8:44 PM
To: Olga Cavalli; OSC-CSG Work Team
Subject: RE: [gnso-osc-csg] FOR REVIEW: Revised Global Outreach
Recommendations 03 Oct

 

I made the following edits in the attached file and noted items that I
couldn?t figure out how to fix:

 

2.1 Recommendations for a Global Outreach Strategy

*         I inserted ?to? that was inadvertently deleted in the first
sentence of the last paragraph that starts on page 3 and in the same
sentence changed ?large companies? to ?companies?.

 

2.1.1 Purpose, Mission, Principles, and Initiate Objective of the Outreach
Task Force

*         I changed ?Intitiate? to ?Initial? in the above title.

*         The last paragraph starting on page 4 is very confusing: ?The OSC
CSG Work Team recommends that the mission of the OTF should include
coordinating outreach with relevant ICANN organizations and could
incorporate recommendations from the OSC CSG Work Team?s report Recommended
<http://gnso.icann.org/drafts/draft-csg-recommendations-task-27may10-en.pdf>
Common Operating Principles and Participation Guidelines for GNSO
Stakeholder Groups and Constituencies; and Recommendations on a GNSO
Database of Community Members when establishing other specifics regarding
the structure of the OTF, voting thresholds, publicity, events, and other
activities.?  Is the semi-colon a typo; should it be deleted?  I think this
whole paragraph needs fixing.

*         I made what I think are minor edits to item 1 near the top of page
5: ?Outreach to potential participants in the Commercial Stakeholder Group
is different from outreach to potential participants in the Non-Commercial
Stakeholder Group?

 

2.1.2 Membership of the Outreach Task Force

*         I deleted the following in the first paragraph: ?Staff support
could be minimal.?  I don?t think we know if this will be true or not.

*         Also in the first paragraph I deleted the size of the MAG (?50?)
because I don?t think we want to imply that the OTF should be that big.

*         In the last paragraph I made the change shown here: ?The Charter
should also set goals for the completion of the membership selection
process, establishment of a meeting schedule, and participation guidelines.?

 

2.1.3 Identifying Potential Participants and Target Populations

*         I changed the 3rd paragraph to the following: ?The
telecommunications youth forums at the International Telecommunications
Union (ITU) are an example of successful outreach programs that could be
used to inform and support the OTF?s efforts.  See:
<http://www.itu.int/ITU-D/youth/itu__telecom_youth_forums.html>
http://www.itu.int/ITU-D/youth/itu__telecom_youth_forums.html.?

 

Chuck

 

 

 

 

 

From: owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx] On
Behalf Of Olga Cavalli
Sent: Thursday, October 07, 2010 12:35 PM
To: OSC-CSG Work Team
Subject: Fwd: [gnso-osc-csg] FOR REVIEW: Revised Global Outreach
Recommendations 03 Oct

 

Dear working team members,
please remember to review the attached document and make comments or
suggested changes to this version that was edited by me and Julie.
If we hear no comments we may submit it to the osc by next Monday.
Comments are welcome, best regards and thanks.
Olga

---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Julie Hedlund <julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx>
Date: 2010/10/4
Subject: [gnso-osc-csg] FOR REVIEW: Revised Global Outreach Recommendations
03 Oct
To: gnso-osc-csg <gnso-osc-csg@xxxxxxxxx>

Dear Olga and Work Team members,

Attached is the revised Global Outreach Recommendations document based on
our discussion at the Work Team meeting last Friday in response to comments
received by the OSC and responses from Work Team members.  These include
edits from Olga and some additions that I made based on our discussion.
Please review this document and provide your suggested changes as tracked
changes in the document or as comments to this list.  Thank you for your
assistance.

Best regards,

Julie