RE: [gnso-osc-ops] ACTIONS: OSC GNSO Council Operations WT 09 Sept 2009 Meeting

["Ray Fassett" <ray@xxxxxxxxx>]

Good suggestions, Wolf.I feel each should be incorporated.  I am also taking
another fresh look-see, and may have some last few suggestions for
sharpening up some language (vs. anything substantive)

 

Ray

 

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All,

 

some comments from my side:

 

section 3.3

following Chucks suggestion we may need a placeholder for the definition of
"special circumstances"

 

section 4.3 should be 4.2?

 

section 5.4 "Council Initiation of a Policy Development Process"[WUK1] <>   

 

sections 6-15: I think we don't need sections 7-15 separately since the
whole Annex A is referring to PDP (at least sections 1-15) and we refer in
our section 6 to it.

 

sections 16-19 may be renumbered accordingly

 

Julie and Ray, thanks for your efforts to deliver the document in time.
Best regards 
Wolf-Ulrich

 

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Von: owner-gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx] Im
Auftrag von Julie Hedlund
Gesendet: Mittwoch, 9. September 2009 23:23
An: gnso-osc-ops
Betreff: [gnso-osc-ops] ACTIONS: OSC GNSO Council Operations WT 09 Sept 2009
Meeting

Dear Work Team members,

Per our discussion today, attached is the latest version of the revised GNSO
Council Operating Procedures.  In this version, all of the agreed-upon
changes are now in red (as additions), black with strike-out (as deletions
from the original), or black not stricken (no change from original).  Note
that we have yet to address section 18, which is new because it was dropped
from the ICANN Bylaws and recommended for inclusion in the Operating
Procedures.  This document also will be posted on the wiki at:
https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?gnso_operations_team.

ACTIONS:  At the end of the meeting Ray asked for Work Team members to
review the latest version of the document and provide comments/changes on
the Work Team email list no later than this Friday, 11 September.

Please let me know if you have questions.

Thank you.

Best regards,

Julie

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