RE: [gnso-osc-ops] ACTIONS: OSC GNSO Council Operations WT 09 Sept 2009 Meeting

["Ron Andruff" <randruff@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Dear all,

 

I support the changes noted by Wolf-Ulrich and Ray, as well, but have found
a couple of itchies:

 

I would suggest that we amend section 4.1 g, which currently reads: The
Council shall inform the Board and the Community appropriately about the
election results. The revised language would read: The Council shall inform
the Board and the Community appropriately and post the election results on
the GNSO website within 2 business days following the election.  I'm
suggesting two days to allow for travel or other issues that might get in
the way of posting the results immediately following the election, but am
open to other suggestions on that.

 

In section 5.2 there is a typo: 5.2 Notice of Meetings   Advance notice of
such meetings shall be posted on the GNSO Website. "Website" should be lower
case.

 

In section 5.3 the language is a little clumsy: 5. 3 Who May Cast Votes  All
actions of, or votes by, the GNSO Council are taken or cast only by the
members of the GNSO Council and not persons who are not members. I recommend
the following: All actions of, or votes by, the GNSO Council are taken or
cast only by the members of the GNSO.  Persons who are not Council members
may not vote. 

 

My penny's worth.

 

Kind regards,

 

RA

 

Ronald N. Andruff

RNA Partners, Inc.

220 Fifth Avenue, 20th floor

New York, New York 10001

 

www.rnapartners.com 

V: +1 212 481 2820 x 11

F:  +1 212 481 2859 

 

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From: owner-gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx] On
Behalf Of Julie Hedlund
Sent: 2009-09-11 13:10
To: Ray Fassett; Wolf-Ulrich Knoben; gnso-osc-ops
Subject: Re: [gnso-osc-ops] ACTIONS: OSC GNSO Council Operations WT 09 Sept
2009 Meeting

 

All,

Here is a revised version incorporating Wolf's changes with one exception.
I did not understand to which text Wolf is referring in section 5.4 since as
of now for "Council Initiation of a Policy Development Process" there is
only a reference to Annex A of the Bylaws.  Wolf, if you could provide
additional clarification to assist me in understanding your suggested
change, I would be grateful.

Thanks!

Julie


On 9/11/09 12:26 PM, "Ray Fassett" <ray@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Good suggestions, Wolf.I feel each should be incorporated.  I am also taking
another fresh look-see, and may have some last few suggestions for
sharpening up some language (vs. anything substantive)
 
Ray
 

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From: owner-gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx] On
Behalf Of KnobenW@xxxxxxxxxx
Sent: Friday, September 11, 2009 9:13 AM
To: julie.hedlund@xxxxxxxxx; gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx
Subject: AW: [gnso-osc-ops] ACTIONS: OSC GNSO Council Operations WT 09 Sept
2009 Meeting

All,

some comments from my side:

section 3.3
following Chucks suggestion we may need a placeholder for the definition of
"special circumstances"

section 4.3 should be 4.2?

section 5.4 "Council Initiation of a Policy Development Process"[WUK1]
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sections 6-15: I think we don't need sections 7-15 separately since the
whole Annex A is referring to PDP (at least sections 1-15) and we refer in
our section 6 to it.



sections 16-19 may be renumbered accordingly


Julie and Ray, thanks for your efforts to deliver the document in time.
Best regards 
Wolf-Ulrich

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Von: owner-gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc-ops@xxxxxxxxx] Im
Auftrag von Julie Hedlund
Gesendet: Mittwoch, 9. September 2009 23:23
An: gnso-osc-ops
Betreff: [gnso-osc-ops] ACTIONS: OSC GNSO Council Operations WT 09 Sept 2009
Meeting
Dear Work Team members,

Per our discussion today, attached is the latest version of the revised GNSO
Council Operating Procedures.  In this version, all of the agreed-upon
changes are now in red (as additions), black with strike-out (as deletions
from the original), or black not stricken (no change from original).  Note
that we have yet to address section 18, which is new because it was dropped
from the ICANN Bylaws and recommended for inclusion in the Operating
Procedures.  This document also will be posted on the wiki at:
https://st.icann.org/icann-osc/index.cgi?gnso_operations_team.

ACTIONS:  At the end of the meeting Ray asked for Work Team members to
review the latest version of the document and provide comments/changes on
the Work Team email list no later than this Friday, 11 September.

Please let me know if you have questions.

Thank you.

Best regards,

Julie

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