[gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters Documents
Dear OSC Members; Pursuant to the discussions on today's call and for your review and further discussion, attached please find the latest red-line and clean versions of the Draft OSC Charter. As instructed, in the "Redline" version I retained the old red-line edits (included blue color text added by Robin G.) and made additional changes to reflect the discussions on the call. Chuck asked me to take a shot at language in the bullet #2 at the beginning of the document. I added three words and a footnote to that section. Otherwise most of the other new changes are non-substantive formatting modifications that Chuck noted on the call. I recommend that anyone with additional edits add them to the clean version and circulated as appropriate. In reviewing the two documents before appending to this message, it appears that the only remaining substantive discussion regarding the Charter may be the Goals and Milestones section on the last page of the document which currently reads "To be determined by the OSC and approved by the Council." Best regards, Rob Hoggarth Attachment:
Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Clean) 9 Dec 08.doc Attachment:
Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Redline) 9 Dec 08.doc
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