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[gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters Documents

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  • Subject: [gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters Documents
  • From: Robert Hoggarth <robert.hoggarth@xxxxxxxxx>
  • Date: Tue, 9 Dec 2008 13:18:46 -0800

Dear OSC Members;

Pursuant to the discussions on today's call and for your review and further 
discussion, attached please find the latest red-line and clean versions of the 
Draft OSC Charter.  As instructed, in the "Redline" version I retained the old 
red-line edits (included blue color text added by Robin G.) and made additional 
changes to reflect the discussions on the call.  Chuck asked me to take a shot 
at language in the bullet #2 at the beginning of the document.  I added three 
words and a footnote to that section.  Otherwise most of the other new changes 
are non-substantive formatting modifications that Chuck noted on the call.   I 
recommend that anyone with additional edits add them to the clean version and 
circulated as appropriate.

In reviewing the two documents before appending to this message, it appears 
that the only remaining substantive discussion regarding the Charter may be the 
Goals and Milestones section on the last page of the document which currently 
reads "To be determined by the OSC and approved by the Council."

Best regards,

Rob Hoggarth

Attachment: Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Clean) 9 Dec 08.doc
Description: Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Clean) 9 Dec 08.doc

Attachment: Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Redline) 9 Dec 08.doc
Description: Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Redline) 9 Dec 08.doc



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