RE: [gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters Documents

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thank you very much Rob.  Attached is a copy of the clean version with
some additional highlighted edits I suggest.  I believe that the edits
are nonmaterial but if anyone thinks otherwise and/or disagrees with
them, please speak up.
 
For everyone except for Philip, who already approved Rob's version,
please use the attached version for approval purposes.  Philip, if you
disagree with any of the edits, please let us know.
 
Remember that our goal is to approve this ASAP on the list so it would
be very much appreciated if all primary OSC reps would respond by
tomorrow if possible.
 
Thanks, Chuck


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        From: owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx]
On Behalf Of Robert Hoggarth
        Sent: Tuesday, December 09, 2008 4:19 PM
        To: gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx
        Subject: [gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters
Documents
        
        
        Dear OSC Members;
        
        Pursuant to the discussions on today's call and for your review
and further discussion, attached please find the latest red-line and
clean versions of the Draft OSC Charter.  As instructed, in the
"Redline" version I retained the old red-line edits (included blue color
text added by Robin G.) and made additional changes to reflect the
discussions on the call.  Chuck asked me to take a shot at language in
the bullet #2 at the beginning of the document.  I added three words and
a footnote to that section.  Otherwise most of the other new changes are
non-substantive formatting modifications that Chuck noted on the call.
I recommend that anyone with additional edits add them to the clean
version and circulated as appropriate.
        
        In reviewing the two documents before appending to this message,
it appears that the only remaining substantive discussion regarding the
Charter may be the Goals and Milestones section on the last page of the
document which currently reads "To be determined by the OSC and approved
by the Council."
        
        Best regards,
        
        Rob Hoggarth

Attachment: GNSO Improvements - Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Clean) 9 Dec 08 with Gomes edits.doc
Description: GNSO Improvements - Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Clean) 9 Dec 08 with Gomes edits.doc