Re: [gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters Documents

["Olga Cavalli" <olgac@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Chuck,
I agree with the attached version.
Best regards
Olga

2008/12/10 Gomes, Chuck <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>

>  Thank you very much Rob.  Attached is a copy of the clean version with
> some additional highlighted edits I suggest.  I believe that the edits are
> nonmaterial but if anyone thinks otherwise and/or disagrees with them,
> please speak up.
>
> For everyone except for Philip, who already approved Rob's version, please
> use the attached version for approval purposes.  Philip, if you disagree
> with any of the edits, please let us know.
>
> Remember that our goal is to approve this ASAP on the list so it would be
> very much appreciated if all primary OSC reps would respond by tomorrow if
> possible.
>
> Thanks, Chuck
>
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> *From:* owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx] *On
> Behalf Of *Robert Hoggarth
> *Sent:* Tuesday, December 09, 2008 4:19 PM
> *To:* gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx
> *Subject:* [gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters Documents
>
> Dear OSC Members;
>
> Pursuant to the discussions on today's call and for your review and further
> discussion, attached please find the latest red-line and clean versions of
> the Draft OSC Charter.  As instructed, in the "Redline" version I retained
> the old red-line edits (included blue color text added by Robin G.) and made
> additional changes to reflect the discussions on the call.  Chuck asked me
> to take a shot at language in the bullet #2 at the beginning of the
> document.  I added three words and a footnote to that section.  Otherwise
> most of the other new changes are non-substantive formatting modifications
> that Chuck noted on the call.   I recommend that anyone with additional
> edits add them to the clean version and circulated as appropriate.
>
> In reviewing the two documents before appending to this message, it appears
> that the only remaining substantive discussion regarding the Charter may be
> the Goals and Milestones section on the last page of the document which
> currently reads "To be determined by the OSC and approved by the Council."
>
> Best regards,
>
> Rob Hoggarth
>
>