Re: [gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters Documents

[Robin Gross <robin@xxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

I agree with the draft and Chuck's edits.  Thanks. Robin


On Dec 10, 2008, at 4:49 AM, Gomes, Chuck wrote:

> Thank you very much Rob.  Attached is a copy of the clean version  
> with some additional highlighted edits I suggest.  I believe that  
> the edits are nonmaterial but if anyone thinks otherwise and/or  
> disagrees with them, please speak up.
> For everyone except for Philip, who already approved Rob's version,  
> please use the attached version for approval purposes.  Philip, if  
> you disagree with any of the edits, please let us know.
> Remember that our goal is to approve this ASAP on the list so it  
> would be very much appreciated if all primary OSC reps would  
> respond by tomorrow if possible.
> Thanks, Chuck
>
> From: owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx] On  
> Behalf Of Robert Hoggarth
> Sent: Tuesday, December 09, 2008 4:19 PM
> To: gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx
> Subject: [gnso-osc] New Clean and Redline Draft OSC Charters Documents
>
> Dear OSC Members;
>
> Pursuant to the discussions on today’s call and for your review and  
> further discussion, attached please find the latest red-line and  
> clean versions of the Draft OSC Charter.  As instructed, in the  
> “Redline” version I retained the old red-line edits (included blue  
> color text added by Robin G.) and made additional changes to  
> reflect the discussions on the call.  Chuck asked me to take a shot  
> at language in the bullet #2 at the beginning of the document.  I  
> added three words and a footnote to that section.  Otherwise most  
> of the other new changes are non-substantive formatting  
> modifications that Chuck noted on the call.   I recommend that  
> anyone with additional edits add them to the clean version and  
> circulated as appropriate.
> In reviewing the two documents before appending to this message, it  
> appears that the only remaining substantive discussion regarding  
> the Charter may be the Goals and Milestones section on the last  
> page of the document which currently reads “To be determined by the  
> OSC and approved by the Council.”
> Best regards,
>
> Rob Hoggarth
> <GNSO Improvements - Draft Charter of the GNSO OSC (Clean) 9 Dec 08  
> with Gomes edits.doc>



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