RE: [gnso-osc] Draft Invitation-Announcement To Join Work Teams

["Gomes, Chuck" <cgomes@xxxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Rob (and probably Liz and Ken too).  To get discussion going, I
proposed some edits and inserted some comments that are highlighted in
the attached file.  To minimize confusion, I suggest that everyone use
the attached version, understanding that you should feel free to
disagree with my suggestions and suggest new changes.
 
Chuck


________________________________

        From: owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx]
On Behalf Of Robert Hoggarth
        Sent: Tuesday, December 16, 2008 6:10 PM
        To: gnso-osc@xxxxxxxxx
        Subject: [gnso-osc] Draft Invitation-Announcement To Join Work
Teams
        
        
        Dear OSC Members:
        
        Pursuant to your discussion on yesterday's call, attached please
find a draft announcement seeking volunteers for the GNSO "Improvements"
Implementation Work Teams.  The announcement is currently designed for
all five GNSO work teams (three OSC teams and two PPSC teams).
        
        Decision/feedback points include:
        
        

        *       General edits and comments regarding form, style and
text; 
        *       Announcement methodology - is the group OK with email
announcement as well as ICANN web site announcement? 
        *       Contact points - left blank in the draft, to whom do you
think expressions of interest should be directed? 
        *       Statements of Interest - do you think these are
appropriate for work teams?
                

        
        Please direct all comments to the entire list.
        
        Best regards,
        
        Rob Hoggarth

Attachment: Work Teams Invite Draft 15Dec08 (RHv3 KBv1) with Gomes comments.doc
Description: Work Teams Invite Draft 15Dec08 (RHv3 KBv1) with Gomes comments.doc