RE: [gnso-pednr-dt] Updated Recommendations list
Please see edits and changes, I've wrapped the elements of recommendation 17 into 15. I've adjusted some language for clarity here and there. I also made a modification to the Whois output recommendation that reflects an operational limitation to EPP implementations. Michael Young M:+1-647-289-1220 -----Original Message----- From: Alan Greenberg [mailto:alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx] Sent: February-04-11 7:39 PM To: Michael Young Cc: PEDNR Subject: Re: [gnso-pednr-dt] Updated Recommendations list Look forward to seeing them. I don't think there was anything added that has not been extensively discussed before, although not all had reached full consensus of those on the particular calls. Alan At 04/02/2011 07:09 PM, Michael Young wrote: >I have to say are some additions here I am surprised by, I will provide >suggested edits and at least one unexpected recommendation I believe >needs to be dropped. > >Thanks > >Michael Young >Afilias >D:416-673-4109 >M:647-289-1220 > >On 2011-02-04, at 13:38, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > The attached document includes the update that Marika made based > on our 02 Feb 2011 teleconference, a few changes/additions that I > made, and what I think are the last three Recommendations from the > proposals that we have been discussing. > > > > I will do another review of the last teleconference and the > proposal list by sometime tomorrow to see if there is anything else > that is outstanding. > > > > Please review and send comments to the list. > > > > Alan > > <PEDNR Recommendations - updated 4 February 2011.doc> Attachment:
PEDNR Recommendations - updated 4 February 2011_Michael's_edits.doc
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